Their reaction is a bit extreme considering they haven't seen each other for at least a decade.

I think in that situation, the horror of having committed incest would feel a lot more abstract.

the worst part is ketaro's luck really is THAT bad... -_-"

Did not see that one coming...

Good story
but in japan marriage between cousins isn't unusual

Wow. Great story.

Thanks,

...well, it's okay I guess...sorta...maybe...hhmmhmhh...

Delicious! Your anime stories tickle my devious and deviant side. I actually giggle maniacally (don't tell anybody..). I'm curious what this TFF is you are talking about, but I'll try in figure that out. Also, your website and this one are all outta wack. Update times are all off, even if they have the same amount of chapters. ff dot net seems to be the most up to date but... Judging from this, you may have stories and unreleased content sitting, uselessly on your hard drive, worse than I do. Although, I'm curious how ..."delicious" your anime fanfiction would be if you wrote them... "hawk" style. Imagining gives me shivers, actually. I went to your site checking for uncensored fanfiction... and it looks pretty much the same as here. I was so hopeful for fics not posted on here...darn.

(although I don't read Naruto fanfiction because it is incomplete series and I haven't read the manga straight through all at once to connect all the proper plot and character dots.)

like this one too

Making Haruka his adopted aunt seems a bit of a cop out.

You do know Kanako is going to stalk and kill them both, right?

Your a really great writer.

Sincerly,

RaimoruD

Hi I love this story you need to write the third part so I can read it. Personally I think Haruka and Keitaro should stay together thanks for writing please hurry with the third part

...so their cousins? In that case, what's the problem? I know this sounds unususl, but I'm pretty sure that in Japan it's okay for cousins to marry, hence, no problem.

good fic...

it left me laughing when Haruka panicked ...

hope you update soon...

Adios for now...

Excellent, Just Excellent, you've finally gotten around to updating your stories, we don't know where you've been Hawk, but we've missed you.

Kiree... and it is an update that I never expected, it seemed like UU was an one-shot.

Gotta keep up with this one.