cute

beautiful!

wow

really, wow!

Wow. This is beautiful. Language, turned to music, images that are clear and poignant enough to last in my mind. Very, very well done.

Cúthalion

swet but not kitschy!.

Since you sked: Ch 1 ended too sad to make it a one-shot. We all crave for happy ends!

Thank you for Ginny's action in ch2! I agree, Hermione and Charlie needed the push. It is great that Hermione acts first.

I liked the reminiscence from Hermione's POV in ch3 even if the chapter doesn't show their future-as I had expected.

One inconsistency: with the attitude of Molly and Arthur you present, Ginny and Harry would be married if she is already pregnant for some months. Why are they still sneaking around at night?

Tsk tsk, Tonks needs to be more discrete!

This was awesome

You are truly a brilliant writer.

:-)

Update with that epilogue soon! I really love this story!

oh holy shucks this was sweet as heck! sort of made me tear up if you want to know the truth and all.

Hi,

I loved it; everyone needs a little fluff once in a while. I got teary eyed at the first chapter. It was very touching. Ron and Neville gone that's so sad. Charlie is an interesting character and the fact that he had feelings for Hermione was nice. I'm glad it was a happy ending. Well done!

~Lady Eliza

Aw! You've written this really well, Hermione's character is really good! I loved it!

I like how you've written Hermione's grief - it fades, but never goes away, waxing and waning occasionally. Lovely. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Dont worry...I canlive with fluff. I dont normally read this paring...but I couldnt resist. This was in actaul fact...not bad. I like it. I thought this ine was cute.

What if she got lost, or hurt, or… eaten by a dragon?

Thats funny, LOL!

Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

Undeniably cute

Beautiful! I can't claim that a Hermione/Charlie pairing has ever crossed my mind, but it doesn't seem too terribly far fetched when give a little thought. Again, a wonderful piece of prose that I greatly enjoyed divulging in.

-Taryn

Someone recommended this story, so I read it. And I love it to bits and pieces. Usually HP romance makes me go meh, but this was absolutely brilliant. Your prose is really wonderful and it sucks the reader right into the story.

After reading the prologue I was even a little teary-eyed. Great job!

That was gorgeous. The depth of feeling that you managed to pack into something that short is truly impressive. The story was detailed, heartfelt, and grammatically correct all at once!

I hope you're writing some original things, because otherwise you're doing the world a great disservice.