I was telling myself not to get attached but as soon as u said that suyuri was his mom I’m mad af that that is the last chapter but whatevs it was expected I expected suyuri to be Hinata mom but guess i was wrong to

Tenten is a witch all Naruto said was that that guy was gay and now she’s mad and tryna kill him u big mad for what tenten

One horse open slay straight to hell

Ero-Sennin u bastard how dare u do that to Naruto

god damn it another good fic abandoned

my 12 gauge is sitting in the corner loaded your next to chaps better be damn good

Love it

Wow,whoa,amazing,fantastic,interesting, and what ever other words that can explain the awesomeness of this fanfic!

16 chapter and im done.. uf... i thought this will be nice story. it was NaruHina.. damn i did read before horrible things that did make me almost vomit.. really disgusting things and even those horrible harems.. but this story.. wow.. itś on top of it... like ur first stories that trilogy.. maybe u should have stay with it..

Good lord, i know this hasnt been updated in so long, bus as a fellow writter i must be honest, i couldnt make it to the end! Why is Naruto attracted to Hanab?! Its beyond pedophilic! She is' 10 in this story and i guess it wasnt soo bad but seriously?! He was flirting and being mre into her than into Hinata, and while we are on the subject of Hinata, why is she always crying?! In The Manga, Hinata hasn't cried, not once! Shes one of the only people who hasnt cried and all of a sudden shes like a waterfall?! Youve made her far too weak! Its insulting to her chatacter, and honestly i completely respect your need to be "original" however all the above would be a moot point IF and ONLY IF your writting style wasnt so confusing. You change back and forth from p.o.v, and its just extremely confusing and doesnt work plus you lack sentence structure, some of your lines do not make sense. It was just extremely confusing. All that being said i do respect that you tried and im sure you have certainly improved since this time. Ill deffinetly look up your more recent work. Oh and before i forget, you try to make Naruto seem too smart and to superior, it ruins his character.

wow! wonderful chapter and writing. this is sooo cool. I was a little sad to see that you are going to make it a love triangle...i just think that hinata is to great to have naruto distracted...i will read and enjoy until you get into either that or a harem situation...both, i think, degrade these two characters. but...it is your story!

omfg, i pissed myself laughing at this soccer game hahahaha great work!

OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY! HAHA I LOVE IT THAT WAS GREAT! I LAUGHED SO HARD I WAS IN PAIN! :D

you know man.. I've been following your story Simplicity is Complexity ever since you started it, it was a story that i loved to read, even reread over and over, because even if Naruto is a tad morbid and sarcastic, you manage to make him pull it off. And i loved that about this story, it would just be awesome if you decided to come back and perhaps finish it. Even if your faith in has died and been ashes in the wind.

um... how long is this date going to last goddamit