Nice little cliffhanger at the end, and how you convey your chapters are also nicely done. ;)

Not bad for the first chapter. Everyone seemed well portrayed. I have no complaints. Also, the concept is interesting.

Hey, don't get mad down there random commenter. I never read/watched Naruto and I'm reading this fic. I often read fanfics based on shows I don't know just for fun.

Excellent peice of work, just a couple mistakes here and there, The shadow clones Naruto suggested work through the maze would've been quite useful as their memories go back to Naruto, however you didnt know that yet ao its a moot point. Other than that my only complain is that you seemingly abandoned it. Shame.

NEED TO UPDATE

4 chapters away from the end awww

naaanniii this is a very good fanfic

orochimarau hi hi haha hisss...dafuc

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whaaa what do you meen it whent to far it was bound to happen anyway this is a naruhina fanfic anyway i meen if it hadnt happend then it would never happen any way when he was saying itaitai i thought it was him about to say itachi or somthing i was like wooo there already sheesh oh it means ow...damn that was alkward...

oh yeah oh yeah oh yeah oh yeah woo hoooofinallywooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooo

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awww thats so cute

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooo
naruto why
cu cuhm
sorry about that
anyway awsome chapter keep it up :D