AMAZING! Poor Hari,

aw... this is so sweet... i love this!

I was thinking of reading about this pairing when I read vol. 14 today of Fruits Basket. I love this pairing for some reason. Too many common ones gets boring. Nicely done by the way. They're so cute for each other.

very cute! i wish you would continue it!

it could be a great story!

Karush-

this is incredibly well written!

you could have turned this into a masterpiece of chapters!

so why didnt you?

i want to read more from this story!

aw i think that was the sweetest hatorixyuki story ive read so far .

I loved it! You don't see enough of this pairing, and yours was the first good one I've read! You should make it into a multi-chapter story... it would be good.

Katanari

...From the point where Hatori said love, I couldn't stop giggling.

As usual, you used a few too many ellipses and you made things a bit melodramatic, but until Hatori said love, it was actually pretty good.

After that, it rapidly deteriorated.

I know that I myself used the 'yuki means snow' thing in my own fic (I sort of wish I hadn't, but it has too many reviews for me to delete it or change it), but Yuki's kanji don't actually mean snow. *sigh* Just a note.

Why doesn't Hatori run, too? He's already defied Akito, what more can he do there?

Have a nice day!

~ Hana

Whee. Unlikely in the extreme... Hatori defying Akito like that, Kureno BEATING someone (well, maybe if Akito told him to), and, okay, as much as those two would be cute together there's an age difference... though my parents are farther apart than that... Anyway, we've tipped into melodrama, but as always your talent redeems it.

*Claps* Beautifully written! Very professional! I loved it. Cute pairing there. wow, I still can't beleive how professional it was, I had a clear image in my head as I read it. Yuki walking down the hallway, Ha'ri sleeping there. So cute. Good job! *Thumbs up*

P.S. Check out some of my storys sometime!

you are so cool for writing a hatori and yuki fac i love you. This was so sweet i thought you should make a squeal to it or something keep up the good work

wow. I am truly surprised. I looked this pairing up on a whim, and that was a wel.l written fic. I wish people would write more unconventioanl pairings like this one.

Aww...I now find myself liking the idea of this pairing. So cute! *sigh* Your writing is exceptional.

Aw! So sweet! I've been obsessed with Hatori/Yuki fics lately, but of course, no one writes them...No one likes the couple except me...

Anyway, I loved this so much! AWESOME job.

wow, i never thought of this pairing b4! i was kinda suprised, but i worked out real well! i luved it!