Wow this is a great story that you have written. I hope to see some of your work on this selective parring real soon.

I now like Danny and Dash together, and it's all thanks to you. ] Your story was so angsty, but yet so good. Gah, I hate saddness and depression, but I can't help but love your fanfic. Wonderful job! Keep up the great work.

Sweet. I've never found any other way to describe fanfictions like this, that are so angst ridden yet good, to the point where it makes me want to squeal and cry and hug something, all at the same time.

I am a new fan to the pairing, but this would have turned me onto it, if I hadn't liked it before. Very good.

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I just love it when Dash is an asshole, too many people make him such a nice guy. You rock.

-Rin

Huh...I'm not sure what to say. It was well-written, wasn't rushed, you stuck to the characters' personalities pretty well... Overall, I'd say it was pretty good.

omg that actually made me all teary-eyed! :'(

very, very god :)

please keep writing. A sequal or a whole new story, because you are an excellent writer.

favorting story.

favorting author.

o.0 wow. That was cool...wow...

AW!THATS SO SWEET!

Wow! That was so sad and beautiful! Great work!

Wow, that was incredible. Please continue to produce more, I want to see what you are made of. Welcome to my favourites list.

Amazing... more?

Are you trying to make me cry, is that it? Because you succeded very well thank you so very much. *sniffles and looks for hugs* It's well written which is something I can appreciate and the emotions in it seem so real that you just want to walk in on the scene and make everything okay, but then at the same time you know that even if it were possible to do so, you couldn't actually stop what's happening.

I like this story. I think this can be rated T though, the M rating is too high.

That was cool. Quick but cool. I like how it was worded.