Excellent story. You're wonderful at depicting Sasha and Milla's character and showing good development in the, both throughout the story. I wish you would actually write more, maybe we could see more development in their relationship. Give us a really cool mission for them to be on. I loved it.

Once more: Brilliant. You've depicted Sasha perfectly. And also Milla.

This is great and you seem to have a great grasp of Sasha and Milla.

One thing though. It seemed to me that the campers at whispering weren't the first group and that the camp had been in existence a while longer than the summers the campers in the game has been there for. So maybe use a different character than bobby for namedropping in regards to the experiments?

Of course it might be me who is in the wrong.

I love the beginning of this chapter. Makes me feel so sorry for poor Ford...

I love the beginning of this chapter. Makes me feel so sorry for poor Ford...

Wow this was so good oh my gosh I'm sorry I have no words.

I really like all the trouble you went to in order to explain all the tiny untouched story aspects of the game. Like Cruller's psychic duel, and the progression of a partnership between two polar opposites who on principle shouldn't be able to stand each other. Everyone is delightfully in-character, and that Sasha responded with a brusque "No" to Raz's request to ask a personal question really stuck out in my mind as a likely exchange between them.

EVERYTHING WENT BETTER THAN EXPECTED. You should write forever. ;w;

Great fic! I love stories that deal with Sasha's "what is this feeling" kind of thing.

For some reason, I liked Morceau's little outburst while Sasha was talking: "Completely innocent hands!" It just made me crack up a bit. XD

Yea, you put in the kyoot shot from Milla's memory vaults! Squee! X3

I also liked the little cameo Boyd made...Aw, poor guy was just trying to save everyone's lives. Evacuating the building before escaping herself seems like just the kind of thing Milla would do- if you can't tell, she's one of my fave characters )

I loved the beginning part- the part with her levitating and him thinking of going after her with a ladder. Also, that was a really sweet gift she gave him, the trip home and all. Yay for Sasha/Milla fluff! X3

This is a COOL story! The characters keep in their respective personalities, while still slowly moving toward a conclusion. There's a great sense of subdued emotion here, with subtle hints. The part where Sasha talks to Rasputin about love and Raz gets suspicous is awesome. Anyway. A cool story!

Easily my favorite Psychonauts fanfic. Not only did you do a wonderful (and accurate) characterization of the two, but I admire your writing style very much! I can't wait for more! :)

Dude, I cannot believe I never reviewed this. x.x; So sorry about that! I must have been in the middle of Criminology or something when I first read this and forgot to review. Right. Well, here goes...

*ahem* You. Reek. Of. Awesomeness. The description was great, the characterization perfect, and the subtext *squee!* worthy. You make the characters really come to life in this and easy to relate to-a pretty important thing to do when you're writing. In short, awesomeness.

For realz, y0.

Very very good. I loved it.

Adorable! Very interesting style, as well. I've never read a present tense, third person story, but I very much liked it! Wonderful job, really, keep up the excellent work! Sasha and Milla were...*wiggles with enjoyment* Super cute! Congrats, nice fic.

-Osuwarii