I loved this, at some points it made me cringe with all the emotionse but I loved it in the end.

Why does Harry keep calling Dumbledore Professor? He's not a professor, he's the Headmaster. He doesn't teach any classes. He should be calling him Headmaster.

A bit to dark in many places! Then to not really finish it. James's letter. Ginny, is Harry really dead?

* reads "merlin's diaryWhat I actually did) me: holy freaking shit Fawkes!laughs *

Meh...
Frankly Harry was too much a Gary Sue for me to feel any emotional connection to him and the author try far too much to make us feel pity for him, every time it was like the author was diging me in the ribs saying "Look ! Look ! Look what happen to Harry ! It's so sad ! So unfair ! Right ? Right ? Be sad for him !" but by doing that over and over and over, it became so over the top that in the end I start finding it silly.

I say it over and over again. Potter to be stripped of his heritage and name for being ignorant and a disgraced to the potter name. Even beggars have more tact

Was hoping for it to be interesting but it's soo boring!

His fake ass friends who help lock him up as much as dumbledor. Hopefully this improves soon because I am getting ready to drop it.

Good

Shit this was good ! now to read the sequel :):):):):)

Ha! Voldemort needs the potion more than anyone. Feel less emotion, and not have any conscience. Fix gapped/gaped.

Wow, first Harry didn't get one bite of his birthday cake, or any gifts in ch. 12, and then on Sept. 1st in ch. 13, he didn't get to enjoy the feast. No wonder he's a runt. lol. I worry that he never had a chance to look in Sirius' closet for the big surprise, and that we never saw him burn all or part of the letter from Sirius. I forgot to mention a lot of other typos, but you can look for lose/loose and then/than.

Good storytelling, but I wonder if all the misspellings are just a scam to get more reader comments. All of the homonyms are driving me crazy. Knit/nit, their/there, knotty/naughty, bear/bare, etc. It takes talent to always get them wrong. You have such odd combinations, I feel like you must be doing it on purpose.

Delightful original characters in this chapter.

Does Harry constantly lie in all your stories? This is the 2nd story I've read (so far) that has him do this. I'm trying to figure out if it is your trademark. The fainting 25 times in the other story was more fun.