Reviews for One Day
Kari Mezmaru chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Yay another poem! I like your poems 'cause their the best i've read in the anime section. Anyway keep writing!
Computerfreak101 chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Oh, very good! Very, very good! Something not Brago/Sherry related! *laughs* But very good poem, you've got talent Twy.

And I am bad...I am lazy, and have some writer's block for MY next chapter of HotH, MotM. (You should know what that stands for) Help me, I've los6t will and inspiration to write. Maiana, Salaya and Camille have left me to do who knows what, and I can't write! WAH! *bags head against the wall* Very bad situation here...
Purple Loom chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Hm, rhyme and grammar could have been better implied yet this is a good poem set. Loved it.
Martinis and Mixed Feelings chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
O.O Great poem! But has anyone (but me) tried to think of Zophise and Koko's relationship differently? Like, in most fics Koko was mistreated and/or raped by Zophise. But you have to remember in this case (and Brago's too) Zophise is considered a mamodo 'child'. I know that Zophise is considered a great evil, who prabably would do something like that, but I'm getting a little bit tired of the same 'Zophise is so terible' thing. Somebody could at least make him OOC...

Whoa..getting off track; GOOD POEM.
Cring White Wolf chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
LOVE IT!