Continue anyways! its an awesome story keep goinbg!

WRITE MORE

Dude, I said i LIKED your story not HATED your story, Get the facts through your head! hehehe, MAKE CHAPPIE THREE! Also, WHO warned you not to talk to any perverts? who? WHO? THEN WHH DID YA TALK TO MIROKU! So yeah, Youve got lotsa fans kailey, All kaileys fans, read my story! I have something to say to everybody out their, READ MY FOUR SOULS HIGH STORY AND STUFF me and kailey brainstorm together on alot of stuff on our storys, so ya, READ MY FOUR SOULS HIGH STORY TOO! By the way kailey, MAKE CHAPTER THREE ALREADY! Or, make the maid story, either way, HURRY UP! Bye!

ok some parts i didnt get but i the end i got it funny about the tofu lol! Well hope you write some more dont feel rushed though! -Frank12

HEYO! Okay, so mainly, im becoming STUPID and its all your FAULT! hhehe, sounds like Real Life, exept the other way around, im kind of making you the stupider one, lol, well yeah, I know you suck at writing ythings cuz it takes awhile and all but that gives yuou NO EXUSE! Put in chappie 2! I KNOW you wrote it, so HURRY UP and make it longer too! kk, cya when i cya

it is a bit small but it is a description so make ur next chapter longer and dont put urself down!

This looks pretty funny so far, a ditzy demon, funny.