Gaaaaahhhhh!...
This can’t be it!
It could have been wrapped up so nicely... then the Lila kiss?! Even the Lila in your story is like “WTH WAS THAT!”
On top of that. You haven’t touched on this story for how long?
:(
I have been enjoying it so much. The mixed feelings when Derek first entered all charming and cute and swept Helga off her feet. Frustration at Arnold and Helga... mostly Arnold for the lack of communication. A balance of Betrayal and satisfaction when Derek really did turn out to be a dick. Relief when it seemed that they werr finally coming together...
I emplore you. If you're still reading these reviews and decide to come back to this story... Please make that horrible mistake of a kiss some concussion/sleeping drug hallucination that Helga had. Because I really don’t think Arnold can come back from this.
Hoping for more soon.

Are you going to continue this story?

Well this is going swell

Now this is a REAL challenging love triangle when centered to Helga. I've read a lot of Love Triangle, and I haven't read one that truly gives a reason and why the bond of Helga with another guy could work and what they bring. I like that you are bringing her genuiely here and showing that Derek a sweet guy. I'm still Arnold here, but you did a great pull :) A really challenging and pulling love triangle. It wouldn't be if Helga had felt something to another

what did arnold do that even some of the secondary characters would side against him? I'm kind of bewildered unless you are referring to Arnold talking to some girls casually (even when it looks like he's not really interested in them) or the fact that he created a rift about the kiss? Or is it that he is still not addressing about that topic, all because he assumes Helga has problems and has to resolve that first before the kiss between them?

Oh my gosh, I can't believe the cliffhanger this chapter ends on! I sincerely hope you finish this story someday, even though now it seems doubtful. I over your writing and wish I knew how this ends. All the best!

I love your work, you're mad talented! I hope you finish this story because it's a complete GEM. And I hate that this is left off with a heartbroken Helga! I will give you 20 bucks if you finish it. Do itttt :p

I like the development of the story. I'm glad you didn't make Lila to be a slut though as the other stories did. Will you be updating soon? It's been over a year. I'll be awaiting its ending

ok u officially made me a team Arnold fan... the saying is correct all that glitters is gold Derek had so much potential and yet so foolish if you haven't notice I'm luving this story

At this point in time I'm so Team Derek I mean really Arnold needs to do something off the wall great or Derek needs to have some deep mess secret for me to be swayed because you dont want her until she move on to the next like really

Now this review I am apologizing for being so late. You might not think this is a great chapter but it's a good transitional one and a good setup for Helga's upcoming reaction. Whether you know it or not, I've enjoyed this story from day one. Don't give up on it.

Jae

Wow it's only chapter 5 and I'm already liking Derek alot more than Arnold.

Arnold's just kind of a whiny bitch that worries too much. I think he should be worrying more about Helga's reaction to him and Sophie than Helga's reaction to his jogging next to her. But what do I know right? The boy has no common sense!

Anyways, I really enjoyed the little flashback scene, you slid it into the text really well and smoothly. I also like how everything isn't in chronological order, or is cut together in different little scenes, like different POV's and flashbacks and stuff.

Good job!

Okay so i voted in that poll on your profile before I read this story all he way through and i said "I havent read it yet" or somehing..

So here's how I felt when i DID start reading this story:

I was all for AxH

Then i was team!Derek.

Then i was like "Yo, Derek is mad fake."

and so I'm basically AxH again. I would like to go back and recast my vote but since I cant, I just thought I'd outline my feelings for you, just to let you know that this story has taken me on an EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER RIDE, which I am tally okay with, ya dig?

You're story is sensational, and I cant wait to read more. You are a fabulous writer, and omg, the argumenst helga has with lila and Olga about boyfriends and sammiches and whatenot. oh lawd, that was some for real-for real knee slapping, throw-your-head-back-and-cackle insuded humor. I'm so glad I stumbled upon your stories.

I actually feel quite proud of myself too lol.

P.s. I LOVE YOUR FRIGGIN MOVE IT FOOTBALL HEAD SHIRT. YEAH. Hey Arnold is where it's at.

What it? I don't know. Just-it! Yeah. yeah that makes sense, uh huh.

ANNNNYYYYYWAY, I want to seriously thank you for writing this story and stuff, and for choosing to ABSOFRIGGINLUTELY ADORE HEY ARNOLD!

Also, A comment on lila's character: I love how you made her. She's funny and quirky and is definitelyy the comic relief. I feel priveledged to read this story :D No joke. forillz..

So, I just started reading this story. And I don't know what to expect - updates wise and such.

But, instead of just indulging myself selfishly and reading through all 39 chapters. I was thoroughly impressed with this chapter and I wanted to actually tell you! Because it's the considerate, right thing to do that too many readers (myself included) don't do enough.

I like your characterization of Helga. She's got that attitude and fire, but I like that you matured her well - it's like a cool, toned down, dealt-with-well kind of attitude now. (if that makes any sense). And I like that she doesn't let Arnold get away with a stunt like that, even though he's just clueless.

The interactions are great. Phoebe and Helga, and Helga and Gerald. And I love Phoebe's inner thoughts when she was talking to Arnold.

I look forward to reading this! :]

Sorry I haven't read in a while! The past couple days have been CRAZY! No seriously. Try going from meeting a guy, him sucking your lips off, and then getting stalked from the same dude all in 2 days! I'd like people to shove that in their pipe and smoke it! But I guess that's college for ya, Oi!

Anyways, I liked this chapter alot! And I'm not just saying that to be cordial. I enjoyed the twist in perspectives yet over the same scenario. Helga enlightened us with hers in the previous chapter, and in this one it was Arnold's turn.

The boy has some interesting speculations, but honestly I think we'll need to see more of the Ger-Bear if the dopey blonde is actually going to succeed in getting anywhere! That Gerald is as sharp as a tack, and I have to agree with our cunning and witty Einstein/Casanova, Arnold's a really dull crayon.

For some reason the car scene was my favorite. I don't know why, but it made things enjoyable for me to see Arnold watch Helga get into another car and drive off. Aww, Awnuld needs uh tissue? He gunna cwy?

Nice work!