That was one of the best and cutest things I've ever read.
I loved the enviroment and how you dealed with the personal conflicts of the characters.
Also loved the ending! Favorited instantly :3
Keep it up!

Cool! Will this ever be finished? I want to read more!

Great story! The Luigi and Daisy pairing is very good. Keep up the good work :)

Alas, another fine short story this time concerning the not so talked about couple Luigi and Daisy. I did notice some hinting towards Mario and Peach which was fine. The only thing I didn't like was that it was short. I kinda wish it would continue somehow. Still, plot was simple but well executed and character behavior was believable. I will be watching your writing projects with great interest. Carry on muse. You have done well.

aww... how cute!

Totally awesome one-shot! Your a great writer. Loved the Luigi/Daisy fluff. hope you write more soon! ;-D

Aw *YaY* Go Luigi. That was brilliant.