I liked this, I think you could develop it with more chapters ::winks:: but nothing bad to say about it, please update it!

*wiggles*

My love, your descriptions, as always, take my breath away :3

What I love the most about this fic - aside from the obvious - is that you have Sakura running a gamut of emotions here. Fear, nervousness, panic, hope, relief, surprise, and most importantly, CURIOSITY. Leave it to Kakashi to not leave anything unfinished. Kill a bajillion enemy nin? Check. Nearly die in the process? Double check. Quickly seduce the pretty pink haired girl before passing out? YOU FUCKING BETTER BELIEVE IT :D

And, OH, the sound I hear in my head that Kakashi makes. I can't put it into appropriate words, but you know. That rush that hits every single vertebrae down your spine. I think in her position, Sakura would have had a double dose of the feeling, since there's the adrenaline and the shock of what he did.

Question, though. I know this is a oneshot, but would you rather Kakashi remember what he did? This is a rarity, but I'd rather he didn't. This can be considered a KakaSaku (which I do) but it can also double as just Sakura's awakening. Past the 'ew, boys are smelly. let's throw rocks at them' stage and into '...WOW...'. You know what I mean. Cause Kakashi is WOW. Wowiewowow.

I also forgot to mention that kissing in the rain is hot. Cause everything's wet. Not just them. Everything!

I can't believe I didn't see this sooner. How long have we known each other now, hm? I'm so ashamed of myself. But better late than never, and I love you lots and long time! Don't ever fear the detail. Whatever you're doing, it's more than enough for me. And I'm the only one important here, damn it...

this was amazing i hope u continue it love the detail

hope update again soon

damn! that is one nice way to find your inner woman *stares starry eyed into space* wonder if that could happen to me...

Sarah: . other than the religion comment, this was pretty damned good. but the religion comment made me a little bit angry. but i will refute the urge to flame you and instead praise you on a damned good story. later.

Nushi my love, what is this here? Something I havent read. Good lord woman, this is why I stalk you. You have rocked my world yet again. GO SAKURA! Take advantage of him girl...you know you want to! Well off I tottle to dust off the good ole Nushi shrine(just kidding)...but dusting the stalking binoculars is a possibility. ahaha...kidding...Cant wait for the next fanfic...*hint* *hint*

Coolness. lol 'religion is on of the greatest evils of human kind' thats funny. I like it. Aw Sakura's a woman now.

This story was avery interesting read. I give it a ten out of ten.

Wow, I don't normally like oneshots at all but this one was great. Leaves me wanting to read more;) Great Job. I agree with you on religion being one of the greater evils in the world too. Glad you can express your opinions.

o kakashi woke up and kissed sakura-taking advantage of the situation was he? teehee, nah, jk

but really cute story, plz continue..

-all hail the mighty kakashi/sakura pairing!

~bluepyro~

creepy! whut about Sasuke and Naruto? whut happens next?

wow...very good, very cool. well written. i like it. am also curious about this "red tent" book...it wouldn't happen to be about sarah, wife of abraham, would it? i thought i saw a book like that recently...i don't know...

religion is one of the greatest evils of humankind? hehehe interesting. i agree. when humans try to define God and stuff him in a little box and blame all their wrong-doing on Him, that is the greatest evil in the world.

Wonderful work, I've heard of The Red Tent and it sounds interesting, but I haven't had a chance to read it yet. No flames here!

no flames here! I loved it!

Please continue soon!

I could never flame you! you write well, and the only thing i desire is more to read!