Reviews for Star Wars: A Lost Cause
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
I've read all the way though, I love where it's going but you've stupid updating since 2006 (At lest that is what it says) amazing book
lmaresca chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
it is like a new hope but without the hope.
edboy4926 chapter 13 . 7/19/2014
Good story
Hope you continue
21stseventeen chapter 13 . 3/18/2013
This was interesting. Shame it's a dead fic - still, kudos.
charles123 chapter 13 . 12/14/2010
Your story is very good and the idea that Luke joins the Academy is excellent. But there is one huge flaw; in the movie past only a couple of days between the buying the droids from the Jawa's and the infiltration of the Death Star so Luke would have no chance to absolve the academy and become a qualified pilot in that short amount of time...
lol chapter 13 . 7/18/2010
OMG PLZ CONTINUE! BEST STORY EVAR!
Vicious Dice chapter 13 . 12/16/2009
I like it.
tornadoblake2009 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
cool
Marutectz552 chapter 13 . 8/7/2009
Really interesting plot you have for this story, haven't seen star wars in a while, so I like this idea, it seems rather darker, and more deeper then the movie well the original four,five, and six. Great story man, looking forward to the update...
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
Hey I love this story, let me know if you will continue it plz ty
dlsky chapter 13 . 6/12/2008
This was an interesting storyline. Although I am unsure of where you were taking this...it would be nice of you to try and continue with it and finish. The parallel to Luke desioring greatness to that of Anikins story (in the original series set) is rather nice because all us fans are then wondering what you as the author is going to do; wraping this around, Luke's vastly diffrent personality.

Although the question does pose whether or not, it was the series of events and circumstances that created such a warm and caring Luke or; as I'm betting, it is that deep inner force that was the reason, along with the will of the force.

Still I would like to request an update and to be able to continue reading on to the end with this fine piece of work. Thanks for sharing, dlsky
jedielfsorcerer chapter 13 . 12/9/2007
this is very interesting. keep it up. i wonder if the skywalkers will come together and take out the emperor?
ShesTalkingtoTheCar chapter 13 . 10/28/2007
update please. i think it was cool that luke tied with vader.
Kaylen Cooper chapter 13 . 8/31/2007
This is good; you should continue. :)
nana lee chapter 13 . 8/16/2007
i like it, way not finish

i hope all is well with you

your story was so strong and you sounded excited to write more than nothing

i hope you finish it
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