I must say when Cloud was getting hounded on by Cid and friends about Aerith being sick, I was smiling and thinking 'Ooooh, Cloud and Aerith, you sneaky love birds you...' I love how your stories either send me into a fit of giggles or the brink of tears. Loved this story and excellent writing on your part :)

AWW! MORE!

That was so loverly!

*waves Cloris flag* CLORIS FLUFF RULES!

*holds up banner saying "AW"*

Come on Everyone!

lol

This was so sweet I think I need a filling xD

Cloud/Aerith sweetness is the best :)

More more MORE!

lol

Aw, that was so sweet! - I absolutely loved it. And I like how you let Tifa just accept Cloud and Aerith's relationship instead of throwing a hissy fit. Very nice and very cute and sweet, I would like to see more Clorith's by you.

T~H~S

Tee hee! AerithxCloud makes me so happy! As long as I remember that she isn't dead, and Tifa doesn't bug the hella crap out of me... Ooh, I loved that part where it was like, "He enveloped her into a hug" -fangirl squee- Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I loved it.

- Hikari )

OMG! So cute!

SImply beautiful! I got a little bored at the end because I didn't understand one part though.

this story is very sweet...although the tifa-part was sad...cause i like cloud/tifa too...well i like cloud/aries and cloud/tifa both hehehe so i can read these two couple fanfics without being borthered

AW THIS IS SO CUTE! i love it...Cloud and Aerith forever! great one-shot!

aw! its so sweet and well written! *eyes glittering* This is one of the best Could/Aerith fics ever! *on the verge of dying with happiness* (well ok...i cant since i need to finish writing the review XD)

I liked how you wrote how Tifa will be okay, since i always thought she would be. )

Also, the part about how Cloud was himself, not Zack, was so well explained and written! D

I also liked how you did the introduction.

And last but not least, i like your writing style! XD

Keep up the good work! ) btw, i really wish this incident happened in the game. XD

aw... ] nice one-shot story! it was so cute!

This was nice. A little over the top at times, I thought, but then again you can't really write over the top love, can you? I liked it, but mostly I'm just happy that someone is keeping the CloudxAerith flame alive. So thanks for that.

I hope to see more from you. Your writing is good. Peace.

Daze Riot

wow, just...wow! such a sweet oneshot. i love it ;D

This almost brought tears to my eyes, it's so good!

It was a bit.. sickly sweet, since this sort of thing has been done before. But it's still written and set out well; good job on this one :)