Reviews for The Cinderman's Kiss |
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GChemical chapter 10 . 12/16/2018 Scrimgeur : we'll uh admit that you did kill him that night but was Severus Snape there? Me: no. He was shoved up my arse. |
Snarry Always chapter 10 . 9/24/2018 Excellent! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. |
FalconLux chapter 10 . 9/27/2015 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This is a truly excellent story. I'm shocked that it's not way more popular and that I've managed to go the three years since I started reading fanfiction without having read this precious gem of a story. It's going straight into my favorites where I will revisit it at least once or twice a year when I'm in the mood for something sweet and sour and a little bit spicy. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity and talent. |
angeltrin1 chapter 10 . 4/3/2015 Wow, this is the type of story that hurts to read. The reason being is that most people will never feel/have this kind of love. And your ability to write it is spot on. Thank you for sharing with us! |
ZianaSue chapter 10 . 11/22/2014 This story made me wonder how many doctors and nurses throughout medical history have been fired for falling in love with their patients... Or how did doctor Kelley put it "crossing the boundaries of impropriety" |
Phyllidia chapter 10 . 7/27/2014 Enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing. |
mareine chapter 10 . 9/25/2013 This was lovely! |
wanderingsinthoughtspace chapter 10 . 6/1/2013 liked it - thanks for writing |
lindamanigua chapter 6 . 5/28/2013 Voldimort, embassador, and so many others... It hurts! Please get a beta! Otherwise, your story idea is original, well-paced, and your research (such as it is) into medical conditions, geography, etc. shows that you at least give a damn. This story has a spark, even though something about it hints to a very well-done high school English project. Still, I will keep reading. But for the love of god, get a beta. Preferably one very different from you, someone who would complement your style. (Older? More experienced? I don't know. Someone to edit, certainly, but not to change the storyline.) But it will help tighten up the prose, fix little mistakes, and avoid cliches. Good luck to you. |
mm chapter 10 . 4/22/2013 great story, please continue |
KneazleGriff chapter 10 . 1/5/2013 Wonderful story. You should continue it. Love it. :) |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2012 Awesome fic! Harry was so sweet! Severus too! Rehabilitation! |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/30/2012 Even if it was not your intention to end the story here, the ending is almost perfect. It's a happy ending with some questions left unanswered as if the characters will continue on living. I like that more than the ones that follow up with the entire future including children and death. The ending also conveys a hopeful feeling and we just know that Severus and Harry will be okay. Mark it as complete if you won't be continuing it. |
WereBunny87 chapter 10 . 4/1/2012 I love this story so much! I look forward to more! |
WhiteFang001 chapter 10 . 4/20/2011 I love it - are you going to write more? A brilliant tale, sad, sweet and full of promise and hope for the future. |