I really love this and "metronome."

I can see this as a doujin, possibly because it is inspiring me to draw. Beautifully done. If I make some sketches, I'll leave a message here for you, and put a link to this in the comments. (Morgana13 on deviantart)

Thanks for writing this! And sorry ahead of time if I don't answer to something-my email's out.

I like this. It's nicely written, even though the proofreading could have been more thorough (I spotted a few typos in places).

This left me uniquely satisfied and still wanting more. I absolutely loved the light you shed on Vincent's past as a Turk (and why weren't his old missions counted among his 'sins' I wonder?). I would have loved to read that first chapter in more detail. I also love the fusion between him and Galian Beast, but some more detail there couldn't hurt (well, it could hurt Vincent).

You obviously love these characters and you do them fine justice in the fics I've read so far (I'm kind of reading them all in one go, you're an awesome writer.)

Creepy. That's certainly a unique look into the life and times of Vincent Valentine.

...but I DO have to wonder...

...you've got issues, don't you?

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Wonderfully written, which is a rare treat to see noawdays on this site. You've got Vincent down pat; I especially liked the first bit, as so many people seem to forget he was a damned hired killer Turk and not just a wispy, angsty, mopey bishounen.

I'd be more critical, but really, there's nothing for me to criticise. Awesome work. Goin' on the Favourites list post-haste.

Very interesting story. And certainly a different characterization of Vincent Valentine as the Turk. Vincent the Dog Killer... The descriptions and dialogue are very succinct. To the point. Nicely done...

That was quite interesting. Good job. _

w-wow. i love your style. the way you tell your story-simple but objective.

the sixth section rather confuses me...but that's to be expected. i'm rather thick.

very nice fiction.

That was kind of disturbing...but it was still a good piece of writing. I had to read it a second time through to figure out that the roman numerals go one through seven. Was that intentional? Anywho, nice job!