| Reviews for The Perfect Birthday |
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   samiamf69 chapter 4 . 8/14/2011 great story! really entertaining! can you please continue it really soon! it's so good. |
| Katerina.Vargas chapter 4 . 8/14/2008 that was great! Risa... haha geez she's a bit dense isn't she hahhaa. Update i love it! and i'm going down on the number of dark/riku fics, :( that i have left to read poo... |
| theblackalchemist chapter 4 . 4/13/2008 the dor kaysum part was so funny!especially when riku said that it sounded like calcium.i'll wait for the next chapter is the best! |
| Shiann Reece chapter 4 . 9/1/2007 Whoa-you're going to get sick of seeing my reviews-but I have to say how much I love this story also! I hope you do continue with this someday, it is a wonderful story! |
| OustxThexMainstreamxNotxRamen chapter 4 . 8/15/2007 Wow... I feel stupid... I just realized that Dor Kaysum is... I sat there, staring at the name for about 2 minutes. I need sleep, but I needed to review this chapter first. Haha. I hope you'll update soon. I absolutely love it, and I hope the next chapter includes Dark. Mwuahahaa. Everything is interesting with him around. :D Gotta' love him. |
| OustxThexMainstreamxNotxRamen chapter 3 . 8/15/2007 Hangovers suck majorly. D: This does not. :D I love love love it! |
| OustxThexMainstreamxNotxRamen chapter 2 . 8/15/2007 ._. I wrote one, I wrote one! Haha. There's gonna' be hell in the morning. Ek. ::hides:: |
| OustxThexMainstreamxNotxRamen chapter 1 . 8/15/2007 O.O Mwuaahahaha! XD So evil... so fun! Love it! |
| IcedOverFire chapter 4 . 4/13/2007 I LOVED YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE! CAN'T WAIT FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! UPDATE A.S.A.P.! |
| SayuriU14 chapter 3 . 3/8/2007 haha i like this story its absolutely awesome! and cute! so keep updating! |
| ST o M P chapter 4 . 12/19/2006 lol, yea, I know, I really gotta expand on my vocabulary since all I've been saying was "gahh, good chapter!". And yea, technically I'm cheating on reviews since I did one right after the other but I read your profile on how this fanfic was on haitus and I really want you to update soon! ] please and thank you. Arigato! |
| ST o M P chapter 3 . 12/19/2006 ne, did a mention yet Another good chappie? |
| ST o M P chapter 2 . 12/19/2006 lol gahh another good chapter XD |
| ST o M P chapter 1 . 12/19/2006 gahh, story so good |
| alicexander chapter 4 . 10/4/2006 I've read your story, as well as your profile. Now, normally I don't review because, to put it bluntly, I'm lazy. The reason why I'm reviewing now? I love your story and you aren't getting the number of reviews you deserve. I like the way you do Riku's character. Though I think her dream of being a fashion designer is a little OOC, her starting her own company seems to fit with her nature completely. Also, Risa does seem like the kind of person who would do such a thing as give her sister Dark for her birthday. I wish there was more Dark-Riku interaction on her birthday though. Do you know that you use commas instead of quotation marks? As far as readability goes, there's nothing wrong with it. I've seen many do worse. But is there a particular reason for it? Because I'm sure you're supposed to use quotation marks... All in all, one of the best Dark-Riku stories I've read (and I've read all of them) on I would be extremely sad if you decided to discontinue this, and I hope this review encourages you to write more. Because I really want to read the rest of this story. |
