love it ! cant wait to read the next chapter!

Great story can't wait for the sequel.

Congradulations. You officially made me stop reading once i got to the part about Kurama's clubbing outfit... i couldn't concentrate on anything but the image in my head and had to start wiping the drool off my face...

oO yay. not ending. sequel? awesome. i will read! XD

This is pretty good! I hope Kira gets together with Kokuei!

Hiz! A-Kitty here! This is actually the second time I've read this entire series, I read it back in October or something I think, but I didn't have an account back then and I didn't really want to comment as a 'guest'. Anyways, love the story! Now I'm going to re-read 'Define Normal' and read the updates that you FINALLY wrote. (No offense)

Hiei came out of the mosh pit, "Are you trying to kill me onna?" He pointed his finger accusingly at Kira, "That’s worse then a brawl between dumb ass D-class youkai in Makai. If one more baka ningen even tries to shove me again, I’ll slice them open!" He vowed loudly over the music.

Those were my favorite lines. You write these characters so well. I especially love your Hiei. Chapter four and still enticed. Arigatou.

Yet again, you have peaked my interest. Two chapters in a row, at that. This doesn't happen very often. I applaud you. Arigatou.

Though this is a complete work, I still must say that it is very well-written. I shall read on and express my opinion further, and perhaps, I will read the sequel that I came across. Arigatou.

wearing battered jeans and a white t-shirt with a leather jacket...- That reminds me of Takuya Kimura acting as Kuryu in a Japanese drama 'Hero'

私は蔵馬のファンですよ

ぎゃあ０

great so far can't wait to finish reading it

This story has captured my heart simply because you've captured the entire feel of Yu Yu Hakusho. I feel like I'm watching this on TV, not reading it. You seem to understand the show more than any other fanfiction writer I've read. I bow to you. *bows, grovels, and otherwise worships*

Oh yeah. I like squirrels, too.

hmm...she met kuwabara.

though i wonder if she could really handle the five guys.

very nice beginning.

she's got some attitude, that girl.

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