Poor Dib, going crazy for so many reasons. I guess in this setting he won't be able to tell Zim about his true feelings...

wonderfully put together. I like the way it gives the feeling of something shattered and lost, almost as if the pieces were swept away before he could pick them up and put them back together. a beautiful work art. I love it.

This is good. You have potential.

Wow, this is an awesome poem. I'm really not one for poetry either (I usually can't pay attention to it) but I like this one, it really get's into Dib's head. Very insightful... and ZADRish. Sweet.

Wow this is GREAT

wow...that was really one of the best poems i've ever heard. :)

Ooh, very nice. Very lyrical, and deep.

*applause*...wow...i really like this...it very deep...and hay why should he care if no one else does...I really like DIB...*DIB FAN*...and this was very well done...love it

'The battles and fights, red eyes in the night' that was one of my fav lines, along with 'That we cannot love without pain?' That was really beautiful and thoughtful! Liked it alot! How ya doing huni? x

Aww I love this its so freakin cute! _ At least he means something to someone... oh kawaii! :3 This is going on my faves u did an awesome job on this.

-SA-

OH! Very nice! -

Wow...this is an AWESOME zadr poem! :D I was actually singing it in my head while reading it to the tune of "Breaking a Habit" and thought they'd also make kick-ass lyrics! You've got some talent! I hope whatever you write after this is as great!

aw very sweet!

i really like this. the emotions are beutiful and the poetry itself isn't that bad. great job!