A great story. Very good.

Wonderfully done! Thank you for sharing!

great story

Good little thought thing dude well done !

Whew! Your writing is so powerful - it's always such a joy to read. You have a wonderful grasp of Vader's character and have done an expert job of depicting his final slide to the Dark side. I just can't tell you enough how talented you are! Hope you have more of these wonderful viggies in the work! I love them!

I have felt the same feelings of Darth Vader up until listening to the DVD interview with George Lucas, he states that Anakin was meant to be the fallen hero that never really understood that he was evil, never really understood the darkness. The naivity. Just wanted to share that with you for another insight.

I love the way you expressed the way we all thought Vader felt, however... excellent. Keep up the vignettes, they're awesome for introspection.

Wow... Just...wow! Powerful, vivid imagery. This almost sent chills down my spine as I saw the transformation complete itself...

No -wonder- he became so obsessive about getting Luke... That is, once he learned about him... ;)

-JCPuzzler

P.S. -Siaynoqsbride-, I -am- your first reviewer! ;) (For this story, anyways...)