Yayyyy
This was soooooo cute...
I only figured the Peter part out when Lily said she didn't know who got her those slippers, nad of course the mention of a rat
Amazing though really
Great one _

Aww what a funny, witty, lovely fic.
I never guessed about Peter, that was so clever! So many great, fun and sweet moments

It was beautiful, almost flawless... Yes, there is a flaw; it is waaaay to short ! Really, your writing is so wonderful, it's a shame to have written only nine chapters ahah. Your Peter is great, I figured out that he was trying to get James and Lily together but I didn't think for a second that he was also ploting to get Remus and Sirius to reveal their feelings for eachother ! You're a really talented author, I hope you keep writing for a really long time ! xx

this is great, its so like sirius to write everything he thinks, im really bad like that i cant just let all my thoughts go onto paper, im to organised and evauliating

XD Well, I can't speak for normal people... But the way my brain functioned, I knew Peter was hanging out on the sidelines and took the presumption that he partook a major roll in this all.

Eeep! So… freaking… cute… BOOM!

That was the sound of my head exploding from all the fluffiness. And I really liked the idea of Peter being the sneaky little scheamer of the group, manipulating everyone who thought they were do the manipulating. It just seems to fit, somehow.

Wiping up brain goo,
Lawli out

Hey. I loved this story. I never thought that I would say this but, Hurrah for Peter! I had a feeling it was him and this epilogue really gives him the love he deserves (at this point in time at least) and I agree with what you said before about James and Lily being more innocent than Sirius and Remus. At first, I thought that you made Peter obsessed with chess to get him out of the way, but the way you made the chess important was remarkable. It really tied together the story. The characters were very in-character. This was a very cute story. I just love Wolfstar. I also thought that Remus' claustrophobia was a nice kink. I really loved this story and I am adding this story to my favorites and am going to read your other work. Again, brilliant job. Cheerio! PPP

I was just rereading this story - clearly, I like it, for a lot of reasons. Particularly your characterization - I think it fits all of them well, and it's a fun story. I especially like the line: "In all the plotting to get Remus and Sirius together, it had never occurred to him to think about them kissing… or worse. Resolutely, he held the vision of his two best friends snogging in front of his mind until it was no longer disgusting. It was only logical, after all. He couldn't be supportive of them if he couldn't stand to see them kissing." It's cute, amusing, and I like how James is a bit more thoughtful in it.

I really liked this chapter! Usually Peter's portrayed as a clueless jerk, but this story gives him depth. And helps explain why the other three hang with him for seven years.

The most brilliant story in history of brilliant stories.!

And I never thought Peter was the mastermind lOl

i was NOT expecting Petter to be behind it all. i thought he was just there so that all the characters were there. and what hints did u give i didn't see any at all! nice story :]

aww, Im your fangirl, too!

this is perfect, so I cant critisize...

HQJ

omg, that was so amazing and beautifuL!

I loved the description of Remus...

Im speechless!

HQJ

great fic!

we can see it's Peter's doing around the middle of the fic xD

or maybe it's just some lol

this story is really great, your writing is excelent! i loved it!

keep at it

Just when I was about to be so disappointed that you were going to leave Peter out, after all that you'd set up for him, you included him! It makes me so happy, because people forget him and they shouldn't. Whatever he did, he was friends with them for nearly ten years and he wouldn't have been for no reason.

Anyway. I love this! Remus/Sirius is so great when it's done well, but I can't always find things that I like. This, the characterisations, the set-up and the realism, was great! The Lily/James element was also amazing! Maybe a little bit cliche - but you know what? I like cliche. That's what we all read fanfiction romance for, and you saved it from complete cliche fluff with the Peter sideline story. Favouriting, for all the obvious reasons that I just said :D