Reviews for Operation Salvation
jejuneha chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
PRAISE BE IS THERE MORE PLEASE SAY YES?!
jejuneha chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
IM SCREAMING. OK. HOLY-JUST. This ship will be the death of me I love it OMG
jejuneha chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
SEQUEL TIME. I'm on a train and the CrowleyxBentley is going to make me laugh xD . "He was completely naked but for his wristwatch, and lying on the backseat." . That's it, my dignity is lost, what are you doing with your life, a relative will ask and I will be. Jibbering mess muttering something about cars and inappropriate xD. NO."his sticky" NO. IM GPING TO BE SENSEIBLE AND QUITE WHILE IM AHEAD. NOPE. "but virgin blood was hard enough to find in the rapidly declining morality of modern times, let alone enough to fill a bathtub" JUST END ME THIS FIC OMG. I'm just sort of praying that my parents never check my internet history at this point, this fic is gonna be the death of me ... *reads* whimpers and groans that betrayed the presence of fitful dreams stirring the dark of his subconscious.(aww, poor crowley ;-;...)
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2015
It's been 10 years since you posted this... And it's MARVELOUS. Please sir, can I have some more?
Alibi Nonsense chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
XD Aw. I love it all. This is awesome. This is just awesome.
charlotteliu chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
hi, i am the guy who posted the last review.(i still can't get my account about that,) Actually i can't see my posted review,so if you are so kind as to reply me ,please contact me by this username.
thank you again for such a lovely fic.
charlotteliu chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
OMG! It's so brilliant. i can't express my appreciation of this fiction. [i'm not from english-speaking country ,if i make any grammar mistake ,do excuse me.]
When i finished reading ,i saw the date you updated this,it's almost eight years ago! Your devotion to fanfiction really makes me feel ,well,so devoting.(what am i saying? i just can't find the right words because i'm so excited to write this review.) In a word,i really adore your work and feel it a shame not having read it earlier.
Well,what i'm trying to say in this mass of words is that ,i fell in love with HASTUR/AZIRAPHALE after reading it.(i know that i miss the point... your crowley and aziraphale are both adorable and amusing.)I know that you haven't written GOfic for a long maybe a short fic about H/A?(i feel like an ungrateful bastard...) Besides, maybe the plot of hastur kissing alice you set is some sort of hint? please please please XXX a fan
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
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Emari-chan chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
OH MY GOD. This made my night on so many levels. Thank you. A thousand times thank you.
yay chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
I love all the W of Oz references. The fic is nice too!
yay chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
Oh dear.
yay chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Did Hastur drug him?
titC chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Well, this was a fantastic series: funny - the puns! I love hilarious bad puns! - and cute and also gripping; I was really scared for Our Heroes there. And the Chemical DeathChrist were a surprisingly effective Deus Ex Machina - or effectively surprising, I don't know, bit of both I guess .
I loved the banter, Hastur's ineffective attempts and then his horrifying tortures, Ed the Imp, Alice and - fantastic :-)
my only negative comment would be that on your website, where I first read it, the notes, billboards... Aziraphale sees in the streets, all the fake signs don't appear there, which is a shame. I searched & found them here along with the possibility to comment, so - here you go!
\o/
knacc chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
I've been meaning to write you a critique for awhile so here it goes. Note: This is kinda a critique for the whole series of stories from "Revenge of the Houseplants" to "Operation Salvation" so sorry if it seems scattered.

In all of your stories, both Crowley and Aziraphale are wonderfully in character. I especial enjoy the parts written from Crowley's perspective as well as the way you wrote dialogue between the pair.

One of the most impressive things about your work is you have this very present, very funny author's voice which makes your writing stand out as yours. Finding writing with voice in general is exciting but finding it on truly surprised me.

Your stories are filled with powerful and funny scenes that I like to read aloud to my husband and geek out about the writing in them. My favorite scenes probably were the "three words" scene and Crowley's tub adventure due to the high concentration of awesome writing in those parts. For the tub bit, you wrote about a guy masturbating and it was clever and funny and much more interesting to read then such scenes normally are. And for possessed Crowley's love confession, by not writing out what he

says plus building the scene nicely to that moment, you made it so powerful it make my heart ache to read it.

The ending of Operation Salvation was amazingly satisfying after reading all the stories in the series. At first, I was taken a back by the deus ex machina way our duo was saved but I quickly decided it was perfect with the tone of both the story series and the original book. I was biting my nails worrying how Crowley and Aziraphale would get out of the situation but you not only did it but made me laugh at how it happened.

You are an amazing writer as many have said. I truthfully hope that you write things other then fanfic because your talents need to be shared with the world. If you do and you have a book or collection of short stories I could purchase, I'd love to do that. If you can make me freak out so hard over characters I love, I'm sure you could get me invested in original characters.
hollyivy7 chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
...wait, so who sent crowley the note?
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