Love this story and have read it probably a million times, and I just realized that there is a small discrepancy in it. It's not big and it actually made me laugh but in the last paragraph of chapter six, Llynya compares Gawain to a lion in pretty vivid detail yet later on has absolutely no ability to describe the tiger she saw because such a creature couldn't possibly exist - the idea of a giant, human killing cat is laughable to Lancelot, Gawain and Arthur. I guess it's not super significant but I thought I would share.

Beautiful story. Great plot and writing. This is one I will have to read again in the future. Too bad you had to kill Charlotte.

What a great way to spend a Saturday, rereading this wonderful story.

this chapter made me cry, for both Balan and Tauleas. Neither of them deserved what happened to them. (

You're story is so amazing. This chapter made me feel for Tauleas and Shona. Very sad. And poor Charlotte! tsk.

you're an amazing writer. :)

Why I haven't read this story before is beyond me but for sure I will read it again! I adore your style of writing. It flowes so nice, no unnecessary stuff in it and yet so detailed. Your characterisations are so fitting. You really know how to do this!

So, this is basically a completely awesome story. I really, honestly and truly enjoyed reading every single chapter.

I think it is utterly unique with the whole tiger and all that jazz. So congrats, really, on your brilliant story.

Happy Writing. xx .

I loved it, very sweet! ;)

yay! the killer rabbit! love Monty pythons stuff!

monty python reference the killer rabbit! i love that thing. rofl. "RUN AWAY! RUN AWAY!" loving this whole story so far. heading on now to the next chapter!

Aww you fluffer you. That was just something sweet. *tear* ha not really but almost... almost. Ok now I am off to read this Fortune and Pheasants you Llynya is in as well. Poo that it's only 2 chapters but oh well, I'm sure I'll get over it. You have now endeared me to Gawain, though I think they are all beautiful men each in their own way!

This is one of the things I enjoy best about your stories. You have all the intensity of the action scenes and then instead of just being all "ok the baddies are dead" some words and then thee end you take the time to wind it down before you end it. I don't know if I'm making any sense now that I have written out but it sounded all well and good in ma head. Oh damn the last chapter approaches! What am I going to read now! I hope a Chosen update is on the horizon... That was my attempt at a not so subtle hint! haha blah

The first paragraph of this chapter made something pop into my head. In the last chapter Llynya literally was "brushed by death"! Get it? Because the tiger brushed against her... Ok moving on, great chapter, as usual. Blahdy blahdy blah not necessary for me to continue the praise you already know I think your great and chapter 25 is cold and lonely waiting for me so I'll just go to it now!

Your weird friend,
~Britany

Shame on you killing one of your baby's brethren as it looked on helplessly. You're heartless you really are. Haha I kid I kid. Poor kitty cat didn't know it was doing anything wrong though! Stupid Tauleas, making the tiger do all his dirty work and then paying for it with a most gruesome death. I just lit a candle in it's memory. I'm adamantly hoping that Tauleas gets a less than glamorous death scene, I really am. Chapter 24 I have not forgotten you my friend!

~Britany

Oh I am so happy that I am reading this story now. If I would have had to have waited for chapter 23 I probably would've cried from the suspense. Yes yes I know I know we've been over this Joe... I am indeed a weirdo!