Really cool one off. I would love to see more!

Jix is gonna flip when he finds out who Luke is

Loved it.

It was really good! Uh...I hate to be rude and annoying(if I am, I'm sorry) but do you think you can make a chapter 2 about Vader's thoughts and even Luke and Vader's voices on the battle of Bespin before Vader reveals that he's Luke's dad... If you can't, I understand:)

Nice little piece here. I think this piece of the timeline has been addressed before, but I doubt if anyone else has had quite this take on it. Very nice writing there, and refreshing that you kept all of those little bits of canon in.

So I was browsing through your profile, and what do I find but this story! I actually found it on another site a while ago, and absolutely agored it. Just wanted to let you know. :D

interesting. Does jix call vader uncle Dee? I remember watching the old movie when I was I kid and well... I don't remember...

It's believable and some what amusing for Vader's reaction...

Hay! Cool story! Even though it IS short, but I liked it anyway.

Wonderful dialogue. I love the way the characters interact. I just wish it was longer:( Thanks for writing it.

I must say, this is yet another story that is awesome and could be expanded.

I know it is a completed story.

But... it so darn good!

deserve a sequel...don't you think?

Thanks for the story, it is really good.

Ooh, I really liked this one. The title was so intriguing, and then Vader's reaction was somewhat comical (with Jix thinking about his sneezing, haha) but totally realistic. Great job.

- ala

Well, that was interesting. I cant really imagine ANYONE calling Vader "Uncle Dee" though...

You've got the beginnings of a really intriguing story-can't wait for your next update.