Reviews for The bunshin scroll
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
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anon chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
kinda suprised that this is here if you rewrote it and it got removed or you took it down.
nine-tailkyuubi chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
naruto temari
narutomaster chapter 6 . 9/27/2006
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japanese-jew chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I'm pretty sure that Yuki means snow or luck, not courage.
Akatsuki King chapter 6 . 6/28/2006
you should keep eikichi and ken, and you should make it so the band r the 2 kyuubi clones that have been released. that would be bad ass!
Lord Ringorius chapter 5 . 5/19/2006
keep yuki and ken and the raoul and lushia! rewrite soon!
Nic'sim87 chapter 6 . 4/11/2006
Ya know I'd have liked it more if the band members were four temporarily released Kyuubi no Yoko's. You kinda ruined the flow with the added Naruto's.
FriendofNaruto chapter 6 . 12/28/2005
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but u did mess up.
Assassin's-Touch chapter 6 . 12/28/2005
aw crud, i thought it was something good, aw well, hope you rewrite it soon, cries, i was really looking forward to it, i simply S2 your ideas,

for the dark one, ilike the silent one and the cruel one, don't remember the name, and for the good one, i like the cool one, ken i think, and the sad one and 1 of the pairing of the light will pair with Hinata, i love the silent dark type, you can make him just stand there and look bored and make him raise a hand and a jutsu flies out and make everything look like as if it is not a good challenge for him, i'm surprise that you can actually come up with the names, i can't even think of two names. PLEASE REWRITE IT SOON! :( i even put you on alert to see i you writed it
Clark Cradic chapter 6 . 12/27/2005
Eikichi and Ken for sure. Which villains should you keep? I'm thinking Suguru and Seta. Can wait for the rewrite!
Deathwings01 chapter 6 . 12/27/2005
Hum...Eikichi, Ken, Lushia and Seta, these 4 can do it I think...

But if you use only 4 characters, that mean there are only 4 elements, isn't it ?

So...maybe fire is a better element for Eikichi (agressive and flaming) and Water for Ken (cool but with great destructive power).

For the "Darkness Ones"...hum...welle...Earth for Seta (silent and immovable) and Wind for Lushia (because all the others elements are already used ; )...we don't realy know the dark side, it's difficult to chose...

Well...I hope I sucess to help you, I really enjoy your fic and I want to see the end...

Au revoir... ;)

PS : Je suis français, alors désolé pour les possible erreur de gramaire, je lit très bien l'anglais, mais l'écrit très mal... ;
dual chapter 6 . 12/27/2005
i liked all 4 on the light side...

Why not have one dark Super Strong Super Evil One.
fabarati chapter 5 . 12/27/2005
i'd like you to keep yuki, keitaro, seta and suguru.
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