What the hell update now

nice

Ok! so this story is AMAZING! i love how Sirius is more than he seems! i just hope alice and frank get back together soon. i think remus may need some one in his life to help him. maybe you should mention more of remus's time of the month ;) and the other marauders helping him and maybe they should tell the girls. Just an idea. i love it and hope you right more soon! this is the best James, Lily, and marauder story i've read yet. KEEP RIGHTING and never doubt yourself.!

I really like your fiction. It's really detailed, and dI like all of the new characters.

Wow this is really good! Poor Alice, hope she copes well! And I love the Sirius Dorcas thing. Hope Lily James make up, not break up!

Thanks for taking away my boredom!

, Aly

holy crap

interesting... though I doubt Alice (in the books, you know) would have really been like that...

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I glad they made up (though I didn't expect any different) I was thinking that if Alice kept it, Lily would most likely have to get pregnant too XP

Mystery man? Pshh! Its obviously Frank

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hehe

Alice and Frank come into the picture,eh?

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going from ASS to kissing XP

wow.. lily went a little overboard, but its understandable

I like the mix of spoken dialog and non-spoken dialog

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MAn writemore it is like wow!ow I am in Love with JAmesPOtter...lol

OMG! You HAVE to continue this! It's awesome! I'm so glad I read it! I've stayed up all night coz I want to finish it before I go away tommorrow! What a cliff hanger on this chap! The girls seem to have really harsh tempers! Lol! I really think you should do another scene where James' parents walk in on him and Lily so we could see their reactions to the relationship! I CAN'T wait for more! With love SG xoxo

Thanks! I'm glad you agree with my "babbling"...i do too ;p

Your story is really great. You're characters are well developed and the way all their action are on par with their personalities is wonderful. Please Update Soon.

PS: Congratulations on wanting to learn spanish, It's really important to be at least bilingual in today's world and it's truly unfortunate how so many people are too proud and stubborn to try to learn anything new. Buena Suerte amiga y escribe un nuevo capitulo pronto! Por favor y gracias!