The story was incredible and pain filled at the same time. You have a strong knack for details. You effectively showed how cancer can physically destroy someone like Jason who had kept himself in top shape.

the story you have written caught my heart and soul. I know out of my own life, you can't wait to say I love you to the people who are important in your life. this sensitive subject is so well written, I recommend it to everybody. good job.

So... I've just found this tonight and read the whole thing through. I'm not sure what brought me to this section... It's been a long time since I was of an age where power rangers was a thing. Back then, Jason was always my favourite character. So this was pretty brutal in a way... Hard hitting and a tough topic to write about. And done with sensitivity and care. Very well done, and well presented. An excellent piece.

I just wanted to tell you that this is one of the very few fanfics that have made me cry. It doesn't happen to me often, and it speaks highly of your ability to write serious/touching things. :)

this was a really touching story. I almost cried. It hits kind of close because i've lost a lot of loved ones to different forms of cancer. My mom beat lung cancer 3 years ago and my Dad is battling through throat cancer now. I just want to take the time to tell you that this really touched me.

Hi,

I cried most of the way through this. It was incredible, and it showed the cost of cancer so well. I agree completely about the lung cancer funding. My condolences on your loss, i lost my father to cancer a few years ago, and this story really struck a cord with me.

THank-you for posting this beautiful, incredible piece of work.

Thanks

Jami

Great story but I can't finish. I'm too sad. I cried so hard.

Awesome story. Very powerful and poignant. Catch ya on the flip side.

Hi

I just finish your story and all i can say is that i cry from the first chapter to the last.

My dad died from cancer 31 years ago, i was just a little girl. He staid with us nearly till the end. I never said good bye to him, or go to the funeral, my mum thought i was to young.

That's why your story touch me so much...

I love it

Thank you

Lady H

I'm sending this while I still have tears running down my face. It was a wonderfully and poignant story about the life of the first (and always will be the BEST) Red Ranger, Jason Lee Scott.

I don't like sad tales, usually; however the kindness and compassion that showed through in your writing totally amazed and blew me away.

I should note that this is one of the few Power Ranger stories that have driven me to tears from the first to the last chapter while smiling at some of the more poignant moments; even through a constant stream of tears. I think I went through an entire HUGE box of tissues during my reading this excellently writting bit of fan fiction on the lives of the Power Rangers.

I don't think I've ever killed off one of the Rangers, besides Justin, in anything I've written to date and I hope that between my muse and the ever present 'plot bunnies' move me to write a death story that I can give it the same care and attention the life behind the death that you did.

I hope that you're life, after losing your Nana, has been filled with only the most pleasant of memories of her time in your life. My dad has been passed for just over five years now and there isn't a time I don't think that I want to tell him something or just tell him that I love him. He was the Jason in my life and I'll never forget him. He was and will always be my first hero.

Thank you and I'm still crying here so bear with any misspellings or incorrect grammar that pop up.

I'M SORRY BUT I UNFORTUNATLEY JOIN THE OTHERS AND SHED TEARS OVER A WELL WRITTEN STORY! YOU CAPTURED THE REAL DRAMA AND PAIN THAT PEOPLE SHARE AND GO THROUGH. THE STORY WAS ALL ABOUT TRUTH!

Damn Damn Damn! I don't-crap it seems hard to find words to adequately descrbe this. This story was extraordinary. I can't really explain it but while it left me in tears by the end, it also left me with a sort of peace; a calm feeling-I have no real way to explain it. I can safely say, however, that I luved this story for each of it's parts; the happy, sad, painful and emotional. I comend you on the this story-hope you never sop writing because it would be a defintie loss.

Rosalie

An excellent story, excellent characterization of Jason and Tommy and their relationship. It always seemed to be more than friends, but not romantic, to me. I've been crying for most of the story. That's rare and I greatly respect your talents as a writer.

This has me in tears. I've been crying for about the last seven or eight chapters, and when I just about calm down enough to be able to read again, I start crying again. And I think that is an excellent testament to your skills as a writer. You manage to deal with an incredibly sensitive subject so well, describing how each of them feel perfectly.

Your characterisation, especially of Jason and Tommy, is perfect. Exactly how I imagine they would react to these circumstances. It's so realistic, you clearly have a great empathy for these characters and your writing skills manage to convey the pain, confusion and grief so eloquently.

Jade.

OMG! NO! NOT JASON! -sobs-

Great chappie! One of few fic that made me cry.

Rating: 5/5

~Art