This was great!

yay Well done Dib 3

I LOVE this story! but i don't really know what is going on. what was Zim giving Dib? this story had so much greatness! YOU ROCK!

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that was freaking awesome! I just saw Dib's world crumble and fall apart all throughout that story!

Wow, this is really good so far. Please write more!

you must update this, or you can leave it, eather way it's the bomb!

Through all the rantings, the narcisism, the in competence and the spectacular failures, Zim is still amazingly intelligent and incredibly manipulative when he spies something he wants badly enough. Whether he wants now Dib out of pity or... something else remains to be seen

Wow. Just . . . wow. This is a subject that's been touched upon by several ZADR writers, Zim offering Dib the chance to come with him when he leaves, and I agree . . . Dib IS unloved, IS unwanted. Why wouldn't he go with Zim, see things he's only imagined? The way you wrote it what perfect, enough doubt and enough resistance to make it perfect when he accepts.

*Tom*

I like your slash Invader Zim stories...

Could you possibly write me one?

I'd like it to have Zim and Dib... uh.. *coughcough* ...Yeah. / And I'd like Dib to seem like he's the one in control, but to have the both of them... out of their character? I don't know, but I'm basically asking for a sex scene between the two of them, both passionate, lustful, and... caring.

Thanks.

Ooh. Very nice. Very well described and written.

*drools* that was so hot! Zim's dialogue was delicious.

Guh. Your Zim is redonkulous. And hot. Stop it. I don't want to lust after a three-foot homicidal alien.

utterly sexy

Oh, I like - so very much. A nice portrayal of the twisted connection that these two have. Zim's new confidence is delicious, as is his sadism. I really love the idea of Zim taking Dib back to Irk as some kind of personal slave-pet thing. Actually, this definitely has continuation potential. I'd love to see another chapter.

This is really good! Love the emotion, very nicely done. Great job!