lol cloud saying to tifa how do I paint you kiss the wall and kiss you at the same time tifa saying to cloud hush you it s not funny

I love the Poem and the Story too!

The poem was absolutely adorable!

This was beyond cute. I love this

Sweeeeet!

i loved the little rhyming bits and the fact the wall didnt even get painted in the end. another thing to thank Vincent for. heh heh.

ROFLMAO! :D:D i dun blame Tifa..:P Cloud can be very distracting..he's Hot! xp

Awesome fic...loved it! :P Cant wait to read more of ur fics..

keep up the awesome work! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

i love this! its so sweet! xD n naughty. hahahah~

thank u for de nice story! xD

That was amazingly cute! _

I loved the ending great job!

i really like your poem very creative

oh wow this was really cute and funny

i read this one day and didnt give it much thought. stupid me.

well... i guess i could say i didnt know much about ffvii at the time. since then i have learned a bit and gotten advent children. and now... it seems like there arent enough tifa and cloud people out there. always aerith and cloud... i dont like her... maybe if i knew more about her but anyway! thats not what i was going to say. ever i did read this, it stuck with me. i knew i read something about tifa painting a wall and i wanted to read it again. but i couldnt find it! then while looking for orihime fics i went clicked ur name to see what else u did and ! wow there it is! now i can save this document to my computer. thanks for writing this funnily yet sweet written story about one of my (now) favorite pairs!

p.s. your 5 lifetimes story is also one my favorites!

i hope u reply, dont have to as im sure ur busy but my email is

absolutely adorable!

and yay for OCD vincent

Ha ha. THat was cute, and I could totally see Vincent with OCD. Well done.