sweet

Awwww enjoyed this!

GONNA DIE OF SWEETNESS OVERLOAD! why is this so simply cute? I LOVE it.. :D

hmm, falling in love with someone with psychotic tendencies... not the safest life choice to make (but heh, I like when Kagome falls for Sesshomaru and he would just as soon kill her for the first part of the story so how can I truly judge *laugh*).

I would totally want to touch the stripes and spots on the guys who have them too so I can kind of understand the wanting to touch his face.

Ahh this is such a sweet one-shot. too bad their are not many other Kagome/Suikotsu pairings.

i really liked this

CUTE

Awesome. Simply and utterly awesome. You should make a mini-series on what happens after this. really, you should!

Great work!

-Methodical Madness

love it

You've just touched my heart deeply with such a seemingly simple, short story. I do believe this is the first songfic that I've faved ;) I thank you for your brilliance.

That was so sweet! Aw!

the saying is 'Curiosity killed the cat, but Satisfaction brought it back'!

I really like it purfact match:D

I like it. however you rushed into the kissing moment too quickly. A small critizism. I don't even know if that is how you spell it LOL. Anyways keep at it D

Schwarz Stein

Suikotsu and Kagome... Great pairing, completely under-written. I loved this one-shot, can't believe it only took three days :D It's a masterpiece! I have a few favorite parts. One would have to be the moment Kagome remembers-and forgets-Inuyasha. It's like: Breathe in, heartbreak. Breathe out, rejuvination. Love! Another favorite moment would be when Kagome jumps right into the kiss, not knowing about the future and frankly not caring. It's a wonderful feeling, living in the present and not in the future. *dreamy sigh* Ah, love ]

Oh, and the whole idea of beauty is simply wonderful. The use of beauty to describe souls, faces, and lives adds some emotional depth, not that it's needed too much since your fic was great anyway XD Alright, so I loved it all in all. Great job :D