I was friggin 1 when this was released!

This was great .

Eh...its nice.

Very nice and short. Although I like kags as a human priestess than an inu. Good story

This seems like it could be really good, but it's just too Mary Sue for me. I get that it's just like Cinderella, and that girl really doesn't have flaws, but still. Maybe try spreading out the explanation of why it is she's prefect, so it's not just a paragraph describing how she looks. Remember, it's ALWAYS better to show than tell when it comes to character descriptions. Thank you for writing; it takes a lot of time and courage to make and post a story and I commend you for it, even if it's not my cup of tea.

There were explicit part, but it was awesome!

Is a great story but you have lots of spelling mistake and some of the sentence doesn't even make sence. You definitely need to rewrite it and let me know when your done i love to read it again.

I've just started reading this and the story seems to have a really great plot and theme, however as you mentioned it does need refinement. please let me know if you ever decide to rewrite this story, I would love to read it!

I loved this story, I'm glad I got to reread it.

This was a beautiful piece of work, I really liked it a lot. I hope to read more of your works later on.

i cant find it on Dokuga... can you link it

You should bold the words when theur talking with their in beast and when their talking in inu

I thought her father died... so how is he laughing? in heaven laughing?

I loved the story, it was absolutely amazing.

What is it? A quick version of "Cinderella"? Thank you but no thank you. Another story written to look like a cheap soap opera.