I loved it! enough said.

Geez.. I feel creeped out, but I must commend you for writing this. I enjoyed it for some reason (I think I'm becoming a sadist XD)

simply masterful! i love dark fics! this was very insightful and captured his obsession perfectly. it adds flavor to the original story, either manga or anime. good work!

Whoa! I thought I reviewed this before...apparently not. Anyways, here we go.

I've read this fic before: I loved it then, and I love it now. Fudou x Ban is a concept that a lot of people toy with in their minds but that most people don't have the guts to write, and when they do it's often either very poorly written or very OOC or both. This was not one of those poorly written fics. It's really very IC, actually, despite dealing with a situation that we don't usually see Ban in and dealing with emotions that we usually don't see Ban expressing.

"He’d watched him on Makubex’s monitors, walking into the Fortress. He knew now what a whore his boy was, had seen the way his boy and that godling brat look at each other."

This really hit really hard for me - we don't see Fudou in any flashbacks (or do we? I'm only able to read the manga as Tokyopop translates it until I find somebody who translates for free and is ahead), but when we first see him at Infinity Fortress, he does seem to be rather...disgusted...with Ban, despite his really obvious, freaky obsession. And, even though Getbackers is a shounen, we can usually think of it in terms of relationships, and as far as relationships go Ban seems to have a history of really rocky, violent ones. There's the one with the Miroku family (a popular Ban pairing), there's Himiko and Yamato (both Kudou siblings get paired with Ban an awful lot), and of course there's Ginji. It's a very insightful bit of information on your part, that can go as deep as you want it to.

I was just very happy with this overall. D I could read it over and over again. Oh, and thanks for the review you dropped me on Going Home. I always try to return reviews to people who leave them for me, especially when they're more than two words. XD

nice nice!

'loved the dark theme~

I must say Claimed was certainly interesting. Albeit a bit short, but it was illustrated well. I think you captured Fudou's personality in an excellent way.

scary... but id rate you a 7/10 hehe...

Wow. Wow again. That was a stunningly good, creepy angsty yaoi one-shot. Very, very nice. I read through it a few times. You're suggestive enough for it to be obvious; in fact, your subtlety in descriptions makes it much better than if you'd overloaded it with details. Very well done with a suitibly eek factor. And weird things happen in trig classes. The numbers twist reality.

Ehm, lol? *blinks stupidly*

Ano...could be that I forgot the story but I really don't remember about that Takuma Fudou guy well...*drop*

Did he really have something with Midou in the past (even if not that way...XP just asking whether they knew each other or not)?

I'd be so happy if you could tell me!

And well, AWESOME WRITING! Come on! I didn't even care who that Fudou guy was and read it anyway because you did is so good! ;)

Hope to see more from you! ((oo))

FINALLY! Someone else has written a Fudou/Ban! Oh, it's not just me, I'm not alone!

Okay, so I'm not alone in being quite disturbing and writing horrible things but what the hell, that's always nice to know! :D

So, how can I review this? Well, I love it. There's the simple bit. There's something about how horrible and twisted Fuodu/Ban is that really appeals to me. (actually, that's a good description of how I feel about Fudou in general really) I love the way Fudou's brain is so bizarre - he really is absolutely mad. I love his reasoning for what he does - the first time he feels it's his due and Ban's fear and pain is a sign of pleasure, the way the second time he considers it showing Ban how much he missed him and how when they fight, it's nearly as good as sex. And his irrational anger when he sees that Ban has grown up in the Fortress. Just brilliant. An twisted, IC masterpiece.

Even if you didn't want to post this, I'm glad you did.

I always thought that Fudô was a little... well, 'obsessed' dosn't even begin to decribe it. What I'm trying to say is: I'm not surprised. Thanky you for writing this, even it it's crrepy.

Oh. Lord.

Good. Good, but scary. Creepy. But good. Yes, perhaps you have scarred my pysche, because I can't seem to write an intelligent review.

Would it be awful if I said that this story has convinced me that this could actually happen? ... Ha! I just did~! Never mind then.

Er. Well. This is awkward. Um... good work?

Right. Yes. Right. That's right.