Is Sarah carrying twins?

I don't know what you're talking about. My eyes were not in agony at all. It was a good chapter. I enjoyed it.

Even though Jareth fell in Love with Sarah super quickly, I am still here for it.

Of course she won't listen. I'm guessing we meet Sarah in the next chapter. :)

I think I'm going to enjoy this. My goodness :)

Oh wow, a whole chapter without Mecrinda!

Omgs, I just finished reading and this was beautiful! Too many times I had to put it down to squee and confess my own love for the Goblin King in all his glory.

I just started to read your fic and I alredy hooked! I really like the idea of Jareth ignoring his destiny, that's too him hahaha. Greatings from a new fan :D

Did you make a sequel cause leaving it like this will confuse a lot of readers.

LOVE IT!

ugh, i can get her being attracted to him and grudgingly respecting him but liking him? truly? i honestly think that isn't possible b/w them unless you give them a few more years to mature (the both of them because they are both teenagers), get to know each other and have no outside obligations to get in the way. i'll keep reading but i honestly think that this should have at least another ten or so chapters to develop their interactions.

Fantastic! That was very well executed ending, aside from some grammatical error your story is wonderful.

She really has absolutly no shame, does she?

"exenterated his high cheekbones"...I believe you mean "accentuated". There is no such word as "extenterated". And "Mecrinda" is a really terrible name...sorry!

Angst is fine. What I object to is the poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. Plus the most annoying of fanfic cliches: "capturing her lips" and "carried her bridal style". For the love of the Labyrinth, can't you amateurs think of any new ways to express yourselves?