| Reviews for First |
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   RaiNiccle chapter 1 . 4/14 soooo cute! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2018 Cute |
| Bayes chapter 1 . 8/27/2015 THIS!IS!SO!CUTE! I HAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING SO CUTE THANK YOUUUIIU |
| StreetlightsAndCityscapes chapter 1 . 11/15/2014 This oneshot was, as Shikamaru puts it, "a breath of fresh air". I wasn't expecting to like it, considering I ship NejiTen and ShikaMari, but I something about it pulled me in. I like his thought interjections and the minimalist tone of the piece, and I admire your writing style. *Favorites* |
| aqua-empress chapter 1 . 7/9/2014 Oh my. This is so sad QQ But very cute though! :D Loved it, aqua-empress |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014 That was a very nice story. It was nice the way you made the story go. It was simple and direct and had a nice twingenof realisticity in it. I hope you keep it up. You are a very good writer. Take the good person test fourth search result on google. |
| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 ShikaTen. Friendship? okay! Platonic? Bring them on! ... Romance? Nyaa! All hail for ShikaTen! If it's with Tenten, maybe ... just maybe, Shikamaru-gaki would do all smugness like this. XB (Beware, NejiTen. Because, Shikamaru-gaki is the brilliant rival to cause (not-)troublesome love-triangle thingy. Hehe.) |
| half-note chapter 1 . 1/18/2013 I was recommende this. Hahaha. I too read Sonnie's Sea of Sand. Man...time passes too fast! It was great btw. I too like all kinds of pairings even if my favorite is Nejiten. Greetings. |
| Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 I'm a NejiTen fan, but I have to say, this is absolutely adorable! |
| jaggedjacket chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 This was phenominal. I loved the parenthesis, and how spot-on Shikamaru is in this fic. Long live the non-cannon goodness! |
| Uchihas1010Hyuuga chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 Wow! It's really gooooood! I loved it! It would really be aweomse if there was a sequel to it hehe X3 |
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012 This was really cute:) |
| jasmineflowr19876 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012 i love shikaten...Great story! |
| Omn chapter 1 . 12/24/2011 Shikamaru must have been so proud that he was Tenten's first and it wasn't Neji that got it before. Such a good story! |
| ElleVipsilon chapter 1 . 12/14/2011 Awesome! I really like this ShikaTen, perfectly believable :) Love it |
