Supposed to have been posted 16 April 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center. but I had problems with my computer, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

Some of the work I read is what I consider professional class. These are marked as Picks of the Week. Go to to find the best of the week.

TSL on Nar Shaddaa: When Atton is wounded, it is left to the Exile to treat the wound.

I think it was more the position (Upper inside thigh) than any other reason for the women to refuse to treat it. The scene, with the Exile trying not to look at other exposed parts that makes it funny. Oh, and an assassinator should be merely assassin.

Pick of the Week

LOVE it! XD Very cute. Good job!

when I go to write Atton/Exile fics, I try to write stuff like this. Bah, I never succeed. It was fun and cute and left me hanging, which, strangely enough, is kind of how I like it. very nice. :)

I really liked this.

Awesome

great!

interesting story

Aw, very cute! Too bad it's only a one-shot. :P

~Zen-chan

This story is so cute! I really liked it! I really liked Atton too, hehe XD.

I loved this little story, I'm playing the game right now, and I adore Atton, even more then I did Carth in the first game. I didn't think other people were obsessed with the romance as I was, and it's awesome to read so many about the games.

Lol. Nice one-shot. I was wondering through the whole things who Sloe was but I chose to ignore it. I figured he was an OC. Lol. Props to you!

Mira raised her eyebrows. “You were lucky, Rand,” she said. “Any higher and you would have lost your co-pilot.” LOL.

I wonder if you realize you've named your OC's after drinks. Juma and Sloegen which sounds like sloe gin.

Cute.

Pretty good Cortessa very funny.