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Epic of Epicness!

2011 update! Hey, guys, my apologies to you all - I've been locked out of this account for some time. AOL bought Netscape and my e-mail domain ( ) was discontinued. That made it impossible to automatically retrieve my password, which I had lost. Anyway, I finally resurrected the computer with the browswer where I'd saved that password, so I'm not back online!

I'm very busy writing with the Battlestar Libra team at , so I'm not sure when I'll be updating this story. Meanwhile, check out Chapter One of the Libra epic right here on - our writing team is author name 'BSG26Libra'.

More.. more please hurry up!

Just discovered this fic, and it's great. Pilots (especially Lee) as cylons is a favorite of mine, and you make it very plausible with the cohabitation idea. I'd love to see this story continue, any chance of more chapters at this late date? It's too good to be an abandoned story. Great job!

o_o! Wow.

This is really good - if you ever continue, I'll be sure to watch out for it.

Lee has always fascinated me. I really love how you write him. :)

You really need to continue this, it's too good to stop there.

This is very interesting. I hope you continue.

well that was interesting .

I have eagerly being awaiting this chapter and it was well worth the wait.

Things are defiantly becoming interesting with Lee seeing number six in the corridor.

Poor Lee is so confused, but will he fully remember what has occurred and actually confide in his farther and the president, as they did not trust Balter already.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

previous chapter was better .

Very intriguing so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Thanks.

Marilyn

I really like this story. You're developing extremely well as a writer and I enjoy reading your work. The first chapter stood alone very well and the ending, with its shattering revelation, worked a treat.

The continuation of the story reveals your skill at coming up with plausible explanations for things that might not otherwise make sense. You stated in your notes that you don't ascribe to the idea of Lee Adama being a cylon and you wrote your way around it very cleverly.

To make this review well rounded I'm supposed to make a recommendation for improvement. What I would suggest is pretty minor: "Suddenly he was..." (first chapter, flashing back to "Hand of God") is a bit of a technical no-no. Just keep an eye out for little things like that. (Note that I had to really LOOK for a nit to pick, here!) Your pacing is generally better than that.

Overall so far, this is a well crafted piece. The lack of spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors is commendable and suggests attention to detail, which is evident throughout your work. You could give lessons in pacing. Your sentence structure is excellent in this regard. The explanation for Lee being a "cylon" was VERY clever and you rendition of Six seems to me to be very much in character. Baltar seems unusually courageous until you point out that he's still looking out for himself. Nicely done.

Keep up the good work

Ghostowl (formerly whiteowl)

The tables have been turned. Congratulations, you had me thinking that Lee was dead. Is there going to be more chapters?