Interesting.

This is extremely good. The thoughtfulness and the idea you've developed here are very deep, deeper than they'd show, and you have given more to how Tech did seem alarmed by what had happened to her eyes.
You've kept him well in character, keeping in mind how he is a scientist based on logic and reasoning and how this sympathy he can't help would muddle him. This is a rather sad story considering Black Velvet, but still very good and deep. Well done.

This has to be one of the most deep and well written and thought out story of Loonatics fanfiction. Bravo, if LU ever has a 3rd season (there's an online petition for it and an LU movie in case you wanted to know) you should write for the show! D

Cool story. I like it. Very well written.

hey this is very interesting i really wouldn't expect Tech to have such feelings for Velvet. Anyway what's with Tech and him falling for very smart vilianessess! i mean he's had such feelings ((in fanfics esspeacialy)) with Velvet and Mastermind! anyway very nice job!

Wow.

Just wow.

I sort of thought about what would happen to him AFTER that particular episode, but I never thought about it to this extent.

And I could imagine him SAYING those things to the reader, too.

THAT's talent.

Black vel and techie? As in Tech's words: In your dreams, hot stuff.

O_o...

Not what I meant to say but still affective. Anyway, even though I loathe the pairing, it's a pretty awesome story, lotsa drama and stuff. Perfect. 5 stars *

I still think she raped him.

::eye twitches::

Wonderful and deep. I can't imagine a more conflicting inner struggle from Tech's point of view.

Very masterfully done. Certainly a piece of writing to exude pride over. I hope to see more writing about Tech's inner struggles with your insightfulness.

I'd have to guess you are either in a writing major, or have natural talent in this area. Keep up the wonderful writing.

It’s taken me sometime to read this ficcy, but now that I have I must say that writing (and grammar) are superb.

The mood that was created was like tragedy mingled understanding sympathy. Even if I’d hate to admit it, that strong hint of romance was very believable.

*tantrum* Just further reason for me to be jealous of Black Velvet. Curse you and this fic for making it further convincing that Tech and Black Velvet are perfect!

(Nice p.o.v. on Black Velet! I’ve thought of some of them myself.)

That was... wow. I'm not a fan of Tech/Black Velvent, but that was really... wow. You're an amazing writer.

wow. great story and detale kiddo. i reall hope you make a sequill to this. its the best LU story ive read! so pleas, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUILL!

Wah! That's so Tech like! I really like this story! Hehehe... It really sounds like he digs her... D

Wow...this was just totally AMAZING. I really never thought about that curse she used to control Tech that much...I love this idea. It would be SO totally awesome if in one ep Black Velvet returned and you made a seqal to this. Well, anyway, awesome one-shot. And I totally can't wait for the update on Evolution Process.

P.S: I just realized I DO know you from somewhere! Your penname was familier. Your the one who wrote Fibra! Man thats an awesome story. You just don't see well written Luigi fics these days. And one that also includes Mario (I'm such a sucker for brotherly love *sweatdrop*) Can't wait for you to update that one too.

Anyway I'll be shutting up now. Great one-shot and can't wait for some awesome updates!