Great read - thanks, unusual pairing but really works... especially with the High School twist

I'm not entirely sure why, but when I read the part about Ronan diverting Koyla the image of a gang calling themselves the Wraiths popped up into my head. Aaanyway, awesome story, just as good as your one and three shots. Looking forward to the long road of reading the rest that lies ahead of me.

Great pairing! and you really nailed a teen John.

:o)

i loved it! very clever

I'm only on chapter 2 but i love it so far. Personally i'm a Ronon/Keller fan but i still love this story, your a great writer.

Definatly a new kind of ship. for me but really enjoyed it nonetheless!

AW

A very enjoyable read! Well done!

I abso-freakin-lutely LOVED this story. Seriously, great job.

I really enjoyed this fanfic. I usually don't like "high school" stuff as I have not been in high school for a long time...but this was very well written. I liked that you still had their characterization in place even though it was a AU. Well done!

Aw what a terrific ending. I am so glad my friend sent me this link! Beautiful story truly, well written and just perfect :D

OMG okay, I forgive you for the angst in the last chapter *laughs* :D

OMG now you've got me worried, only two more chapters, if this ends badly *shakes fist* :D

Well I'm glad to see John back in spirits. Boy PMS is so much worse than girl PMS :D