a really interesting idea. good fic. :)

So, is this a oneshot, or a continuing story? I hope it's the latter. Nice descriptive work. I think you got Seifers characterisation down to a T, simply with the one line "I need a piss". Do continue writing, whether on this story or another.

I really like it! It could use some improvements, and everyone can use a beta reader if they don't have one! I look forward to seeing more from you.

O...interesting concept. I like it!

Squall and Seifer are just so perfect no matter where they are.