Reviews for Betrayed |
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darkpercy5 chapter 2 . 5/22/2015 Please continue. I like it. XP |
ToddGilliss chapter 2 . 9/12/2014 time to come back and start this story back up |
Licorne8 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013 Hello, I just found and read your fic, This is a great story, I hope you have not abondonnée and tarderiez you do not post the result and if possible finish. PS: I hope to hear the end of it as it is well written and so far it is very promising. |
grimmich chapter 2 . 10/5/2012 hmm good so far! now questions... How tall is Harry? what is his build? how tall is Tonks? Will Harry grow or fill out before he goes back to Hogwarts? Are you going to have him keep his glasses? think about the disadvantages: if he looses them he is defenseless, they are easily recognizable, they hide his eyes to an extent, and I am sure he hates them anyways. Can Harry get a tattoo to commemorate Sirius? I love it when he gets tats! can he make/keep his hair short and spiky *drool*? or are you one of the ones who like it long :P. Is he going to get a new wardrobe that doesn't consist of Dudley's castoffs? Does Harry inherit anything from Sirius(like the house so he can kick them all out! mwhahaha)? What about Remus? is he in on the Harry traitor group or is he a genuine good guy? Is it all the weasley family, just certain ones, or just Ron? Or is it everyone but Fred and George? (I like fred and george so I hope they aren't in on it...) does Harry learn Occlomency before going back to school? I he even going back to school? these are but a few questions I have but will hold off asking any others. I can't wait to read more of the story, it has great potential! |
pokemon-hogwarts4eva chapter 2 . 6/10/2011 update please...i know its been ages, but please continue hope severus is on harry's side |
Scabbers1957 chapter 2 . 10/14/2010 This has the potential to be a great story, I hope you haven't abandoned it. I'll add it to my story alerts just in case you decide to finish it. :) |
wolfzmasterz chapter 2 . 4/3/2010 wow thats a pretty great story cant wiat to read more hope to read ya soon |
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 11/2/2009 Now that Harry is outta that hell-hole...time for the fun and the bashing to begin. Bring on the pain! |
Beth5572 chapter 2 . 6/3/2009 I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Thank you, Terri |
fireboltfx chapter 2 . 4/23/2009 bloody brilliant |
Spinel Dragoon chapter 2 . 4/20/2009 do me a favor and make sure they interact some more if you get my well hidden sexual inuendo filled message |
wsbenge chapter 2 . 9/8/2007 Not a bad start. Too bad it seems to be abandoned. |
Kollvarg chapter 2 . 7/9/2007 very nice! abolultey!(lol) love it! a little advise i you don't mind, use a bit more commas(,) and a few dot' more lengh and you'll have a nice story setup! CONTINUE OR I'LL SUE YOU FOR NOT BEING NICE hehe... |
damon blade chapter 2 . 2/15/2007 Very nice fic, and I must say I'm looking forward to more so hard to find a good Harry Tonks fic, so keep up the good work |
Xeroboros chapter 2 . 12/23/2006 Nice, you included two of my favs Luna and Neville. |