Such an amazing fic drama suspense fluff smut and over all complete awesomeness, really hope you return soon to complete this fic. Its just so good. Please don’t leave us hanging we beg you.

u guys are so embarrassing it's Soo cute!

I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I just have to say that you did a fantastic job. The sex scenes were some of the best I've ever read, and the depth of the characters and their interactions are wonderful. I will go look to see what else you have written now!

Oooh... this was SO GOOD. Ok, I knew it was unfinished going in and yes, it ends abruptly leaving me greedy for more, but still- what a read! I love both main couples and the way they are portrayed SO HARD. I would love the rest, but am really thankful for this much great sexy story, honestly. MMMPH.

why are there more details on kakairu lemon than sasunaru's T_T i've been waiting for so long and they only got a make out session T_T

OH GOD THIS WAS LIKE HARRY AND SNAPE WHEN INSTEAD OF GIVING OUTNHIS MEMORIES HE SAW INTO SNAPE'S PAST BUT THIS IS TOO FUNNY HAHAHAHAHAHHA

wow i never pegged Iruka as the seme

NARUTO YOU DUN GOOFED. WHY CANT THIS STORY CONTINUEEE

I am beyond words at how brilliant this story is! It's so sweet yet intriguing!
It's been a crazy long time but I hope we see more of it as you've left so many unanswered questions. What was the Princess' plan for Iruka? What will happen in the race? When will Sasuke and Naruto finally find use for their pencil cases? :D
I'd be happy to hear from you in either an update or at least a line to tell me if you're still writing.

Cheers,
Lap aka Nocens

I can't believe I never read this one! EVERYONE is so freaking adorable ksjsjdndbcksks and being all excited to do nice things for each other, testing the waters, kakashi's polite manipulation 3 3 you are amazing.

This story is the perfect mix4ure of fluff, plot, and smut.

Poor Kakashi is going to have a heart attack with all these blasts-from-the-pasts! Sad for him but hilarious for me! Seriously loving this story right now, it is captivating and damn some one really should draw the four of them in their yukatas because your detailing is so vivid and beautiful! Onward to Sasuke's (and mine) hoped for kiss!

well this was a nice one, its so SAD its not continued.
at first it was kinda hard to read... your "screeching" fangirl level was high omg XD there were too many exaggerated descriptions and fancying them and stuff... but along the story u got so much BETTER at everything. This game is nice and i like the layers and the plots its refreshing. BUT the best thing about it that kept me here reading was the TENSION u can make HOLLYYYY SHIIIITTTT! the attraction and feels were so HIGH wow. Loved it.
I also love ure not one for the hetero-stereotyped pairings, u know, where theres the uke and the seme and thats IT, and the uke must be girly and the semem manyl. Gosh that shit. Especially for these dorks its so bad. I like u was not one of them.

ok im not good at doing this but...yeah. Basically the story was a nice one and u got better along it its sad u left it behind but good job, thanks. It was so good that i read it even knowing its unfinished :)

Whaa- such good story!
Update! Update!

Kakashi & Iruka
*nosebleed*
Sasuke & Naruto
*nosebleed*
*dying from massive blood loss*
"i have no regrets now"