Jesus Christ, I already can't. Everything is stupidly edgy for no reason and, at best, this seems to be a self-insert of Naruto rather than the OC version of him you went for. I don't really have much I can say besides that as this can't even fall into my normal way of reviewing.

This story has been borderline cringy throughout up till now, but having "demon" carved into his headband is just too much. I get that he's angsty because people were mean to him and he's friends with a chakra monster, but this is feeling more and more like a self-insert. Him being really tall and muscular should've tipped me off, or Kurenai having impure thoughts about him for that matter. I guess I shouldn't have given this the benefit of the doubt.

Trash can trash do not read

It is a good story, I hope you continue, greetings, see you bye!

This story, while well written, feels like it’s being dragged out far
too much.

I thought zabuza sword had regenerative properties, like an auto repair

...I...really can't root for a slavemaster. Sorry, Hinata, but I'm with Neji here.

Stupid fox, always trying to get into a fight smh.

I like the concept, although I think the execution could be improved in a few ways;
1) That has to be the edgiest 11-year-old I have ever seen. Frankly, I feel that that level of edginess is a bit absurd for how old he is, although I can somewhat understand it if it is due to not only growing up with a literal demon as his only adviser, but also his physically more mature body.
2) This Sarutobi reminds me of some of the worse incompetent/delusional Dumbledore fics out there. Maybe tone it back a bit? He is, after all, the military dictator of a city-state based around an army of superpowered mercenaries, with him being the strongest. Sarutobi having lived through and fought in multiple shinobi wars, him being that naive feels really forced. Unless, of course, he actually is delusional, in which case Konoha is probably doomed.

"The blonde wasn't one to showboat..." Seriously? That's practically all that this super-emo asshole!Naruto has done the entire chapter. If the goal was to portray Naruto as a bigger asshole than Sasuke, you succeeded.

You finished choking on kimimaro's cock? From the way you write, either this 'hardened' naruto is pathetically weak or kimimaro is secretly madara. Either way, fucking inconsistent. Shameful.

Huh. When Naruto's curse seal is active...he becomes Trogdor.

I'm done this shit is boring

13 chapters and not a single hint of the harem this is getting fucking boring

Well looks like I’m going to stop reading after this chapter. Should have just let naruto continue his mission and let anko die. He never cared about emotions and now he’s suddenly giving into them. Terrible writting