Love the last line XD claim your man kaname ! !

"Its A-Ok to tell Tessa'! hihihihhhih
cont. this Dave if u pls..ahahahha wander what kurz nd melissas thought? Naaaaa too lemon

a really gd story, i love the ending bit... it's ok to tell tessa :P great job :D

"It's OK to tell Tessa..."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA

Bloody brilliant! :D

that was awesome...srsly XD

sorry if this is too much to ask (especially in a review) but do u know where/how i can read the latest full metal panic manga, without buying it?

'It's okay to tell Tessa' lol. Nicely done.

Your reputation preceeds you in the FMP forums. This is the first chance I've had to read anything of yours and I liked it quite a bit.

The way you've written this particular one shot reminds me a lot of the way the novels are written. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not but as a feature I rather enjoyed it. It lent a sense of credability to the work - almost as though if this scenario were to happen this is how SG would write it. It's great that you've been able to include details about the most recent revelations in the novels as well without giving too much away.

I found both Sousuke and Kaname to be in character for the most part all the way through and the ending quip made me smile. It was a perfect way to end it and it was a very well written one-shot. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Langus

Oh hi!

I loved this fic!

And I love it the end!

"It's ok to tell Tessa!" k

And don't know about you, but I hate Tessa!

I don't know really why..

Maybe it's because she lies to Kanami, saying that she is dating Sousuke! What a big liar..

But...you could help?

It's just that I saw FMP, FMP? Fumuffu, and FMP the second raid..

And I really wanted to knoe if theres is more episodes?

Cause FMP the second raid finished ate episode 13, doesn't it?

And if you could help with date I would be very pleased!

;x

Bye

aww! so cute! I really like your ff. FMP is the best anime fumoffu ist the funniest! sousuke and kaname are such a good pairing! again, I love your ff.

Wonderful fic. The last ligne is priceless. Thank you very much.

That very last line of Kaname's is just nasty. I'm not sure Sousuke will understand, though.

Great story! Love this one great work showing the bond between Sousuke and Kaname I've always thought that the haircut that she gave him and the trust he placed in her was a great example of the trust in the relationship and you've shown that again here in this story. Love the bit at the end with her saying it was ok to tell Tessa, haha. Great work.

I really enjoyed this story, and I can see her saying that it was ok for him to tell Tessa. Not to be cruel to Tessa she would know that Sousuke wouldn't do it in a mean or demineing manner. As she might if she lost her temper with Tessa.

Great story

“It’s OK to tell Tessa…”

CRUEL... and Kaname used to be so nice...

but anyway nice story.

Hahahaha... I loved the ending! Great job with the story... short, sweet, and straight to the point.