| Reviews for The Name Satoshi |
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   Chiba Lae chapter 22 . 10/25/2010 This was simply cute. Albeit the spelling errors and general lack of punctuation, it was obviously legible. And the plot was sweet. And Little Satoshi? Oh my god! "he gave me hugs and kisses and then I got EGGS!" "Because it's a secret. You can't tell secrets; they're SECRETS!" God! So adorable! |
| Byebyei4gothisexisted chapter 23 . 11/12/2009 hn |
| SHOT.W chapter 8 . 12/5/2008 This story is very good. I mean, the plot is, but the grammar and pelling and punctuation are kind of painful to read. I don't mean to be mean, I'm just sort of a perfectionist so I like those kinds of things to be correct. When I read this, I feel like re-writing it for you with correct grammar and all that. I wouldn't change the story, just proofread it. If you wouldn't mind, could I re-write it and send it to you. I think all the readers would like it better if it were written correctly. Plz don't think I'm trying to be mean! |
| Pompous Pep chapter 23 . 6/30/2008 This story was great I hope you write more Sato x Dai soon |
| Xekt chapter 13 . 1/25/2008 The whole story and concept was just adorable, however you need to work on both your grammar and spelling. There's many obvious errors- you should correct it (or get someone else to- I'm free if you wish) and repost it. Just a suggestion. Other than that it was rather cute. Good job. |
| DragonSteel chapter 23 . 10/21/2007 Wow, this story was so adorable, I love it P.s Sexy Rob is awesome |
| bljgahfgj chapter 8 . 8/6/2007 OMFG I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! I'm sorry and your fic is great and stuff, it's interesting and original, but the grammar is horrible! You should really get a beta (or a beta for your beta). The first few chapters were way better, what happened? |
| Hoku ala chapter 23 . 7/12/2007 very Good! It was fun to read! |
| noor chapter 23 . 2/12/2007 no it wasnt a waste of time i liked it make another one i really liked it |
| noor alahmadi chapter 20 . 2/9/2007 do u no how pissed i would be if u didnt keep on writing? ah lol jkjkjkjkjk |
| TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 23 . 1/28/2007 This story was good... VERY GOOD. |
| Asia chapter 23 . 1/7/2007 LOL i love DEE! he's too cute, XDD that was hilarious though. Poor Dee. Wonderful story really adorable i absolutely adore little satoshi! |
| SatoshiObsessedFreak chapter 23 . 10/14/2006 poor Rob XD Wah I've finished the whole story! Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena |
| SatoshiObsessedFreak chapter 22 . 10/14/2006 Haha that was a lot of laughs in a row XD THERE'S THAT SMILEY AGAIN! Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena |
| SatoshiObsessedFreak chapter 21 . 10/14/2006 hah this is awkward haha so true XD how can it be the end? There's two more chapters XD I use that smiley WAY too much XD Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena |
