Ed... Died. That was just so sad :'( But hey, wouldn't it be cool to have another chapter when Al attend Ed's funeral and when he dreamt that night, he will see Ed & his mom? Anyway, thanks for writing such an inspirational fic! :)

Love the title and ending sentence :) I really feel like this is what happened in the series sort of, since Ed knew he had to pay for his mistakes. But..SUCH a sad way to go D: Poor Al! He's all alone now! Still really epicly written...but...so sad XD. Nice story!:)

I Reviewed, w00t. EL OH EL. "duck duck in the butt"-Random person. Good Job with the fanfic, it wasn't too choppy, unlike 'other' fics... *throws a Death glare at a multitude of Fanfic writers*

"May the Wiggles guide you..."-Me

-Sked-San-san

Quite interesting... Bye Bye Ed! *waves* It's nicely written. Thank you for writing.

~ mIss.

AWe shoot...now i'm depressed...

...that was great tho! Made me sad! TT_TT Poor ed! Poor al! TT_TT

Such depth and emotion in a work of writing; this is good work. I can understand everyone's reactions in this. Poor Al. What am I saying? Poor ED! Well, things worked out...kinda. Keep up the good work!

Wow.

...I really, really liked that.

Hee hee...I guess it can't be helped that I'm sadistic. But, hey, if you wrote more like this, I'll read it. In fact, I'm going to go check now.

I liked the way you ended it.

Hm...it leaves me with something to think about. Not many people can do that.

. I like Death.

After all, I am Death's right arm...

Death's Scythe

! (#*!( #*% This sucked! I'm flaming!

Lolz...I'm jk...its just really sad...T_T...Ed does sacrifice everythign for his otouto...

how sad... *sniff*

What happend to Al? I'd like to know. Though that is what your imagination is for, isan't it? Anyway, great writing, a bit rushed but an awsome oneshot (The ending of FMA sucked, but I'm glad it didn't end like THIS, lol)

o.o wow... that was good! it was so angsty! XD yay! way to go!

poor edo!and al!T.T

Awesome, awesome, awesome. Is this a multi-chapter story or just a one-shot? It would be awesome if it continued, but it's perfect for a stand alone. Very sad. Very moving. Loved the part with Ed crying in Sloth's arms and his thoughts after she stabbed him. Poignant. Loved it. Hope to see more, but I can safely say I was extremely pleased by what was here. Write more FMA stories!

Signing out

-LAXgirl

Kanatasha: *wails* Not Ed_kuns! *glares at Dance x, grabs a mallet*

Kayko: *watches a slight smile on her lips.*

Katrena: *also watching with the same smile, sighs slightly as she turns to Dance x* You might want to run.

Kanatasha: How dare you! You are evil! Evil! Killing my Ed_kuns like that! *wails* Poor Ed!

Edward: *sticks his head in* What about poor me?

Kanatasha: *sniffles* Dance x wrote...a fanfic...killing you! *wails, swinging her mallet*

Edward: *gasps, glares at Dance x* You're favorite hm?

Kanatasha: It...it...it isn't fair!

Kayko/Katrena: *slowly backing up a demonic smile on their faces*

Edward: I know...I know...sh...it's okay.

Kanatasha: I didn't get to kill you!

Edward: I know...I kn...WHAT!

Kanatasha: *turns to him, demonic smile on her lips* I'm a twisted, sadistic little girl. I love angst fics. I love seeing my favorite characters dieing or in near death. Its just so...ah I don't know how to describe it. Then I love messing with people's minds thinking for a short while I hate it. But I don't...I love it. Dance x write more okay. This was really good. But next time blow something up. Al maybe?

Edward: *gasp, glares speaks with venom* Don't...you...DARE touch MY little brother! *turns to Dance x* Thank you SO much for recruiting a new twisted fan of your fics! AH! Why do I bother with you people?

Kanatasha: Because you don't have a choice. Now, my voices want to play with you.

Kayko/Katrena: *advance on Edward*

Edward: *terror on his face* Help...

*fades out*

Okay, okay, I reviewed, chill! "TT" is right! Poor Edo! (But you wrote it so well... It was as though it was stright from the anime...) Great job! Loved it!