Reviews for Torn |
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BG224 chapter 10 . 1/3 Thanks for the read! |
jasongd chapter 10 . 2/8/2018 And another great story congrats |
abandonedaccount47 chapter 2 . 11/13/2016 T_T Ow, my heart. |
VioletAHS chapter 8 . 4/20/2016 That was... like, wow XD |
Summer chapter 4 . 4/19/2016 You should really just make a book out of this and publish it. Of course you'd probably have to change the characters names and that fact that it's supposed to be fanfiction (just for copyright reasons) but this is really an interesting story! :D |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/17/2016 It's beautiful. Thank you for writing such a beautifully tragic piece of art. |
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 10 . 10/14/2014 This was the best story ever! I hope there's a squel! |
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 8 . 10/14/2014 wha-what! This story just keeps getting better and better! How could this have happened without Danny's knowledge? OMG! |
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 7 . 10/14/2014 I notice that you mix up cough and couch. you would say she laid on the cough and then say he couched for 5 minutes. Do you do that on purpose because it's suppose to be the other way around. Besides that I absolutely love this story. |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/30/2013 Please write MORE! I MUST KNOW MORE! |
Sam Manson Repilica chapter 10 . 4/18/2013 Very good i love this |
Sam Manson Repilica chapter 3 . 4/18/2013 Looks like danny is in love with a stripper Just a joke i know she' works a magazine |
earlschibiangel chapter 10 . 1/12/2013 Very nice story over all. |
StupidlyGenius chapter 8 . 9/20/2012 wow. |
StupidlyGenius chapter 7 . 9/20/2012 allan ia adorable! |