What? Is that it? I was just getting comfortable to read more about this sweet life of theirs. Definitely need more chapters.

Wow, pretty hot time there tonight - enjoyed it - gotta ask though - at what point do interludes turn into chapters? Really hoping to see more on the original story - don't get me wrong- really enjoy these scenes. Thanks again.

Ah...fireworks...my favorite on Fourth of July!

Wow, that was hot. Just like a firecracker. It was a bit weird with the sparkler, but it worked. Good writing. Hope to read some more soon. Keep on writing, best of luck.

cant wait till next chapter

wow, things are getting a little tight around here. LOL

Thanks (I think) .

Wow, that was great. Keep up the good work.

This passage. Oh. My. How. Fucking. Hot!

"...the fine trail of down that marked the path to all his desires, inhaling deep of Jack’s smell, hot and heavy and laden with want."

And this was so CUTE:

“’S what you get for bein’ a lazy ass, Jack”

“Should start sleepin’ in more often”

And those last two paragraphs. Wow is all I can say!

sweet! keep writing

Aw, I liked this. This chapter in particular, as well as the second one. (:

great, now more please. Love these stories.

WOW!. That was very good. Reads very well. I am very impressed. Hope you have some more chapters coming.

I don't review near as often as I should, (Shame on me, I know.) but I couldn't quite help it with this one. I have a wretched weakspot for Brokeback FF, and this is one of my favorites so far. Nice use of a kind of poetic and flowing prose. It has a stark, run-on feel to it that really does justice to the type of story you're writing here. I'd like to see a little more dialogue, but that's just me. Keep up the good work; I'd really like to see more.

~EC

Wonderful first chapter, looking forward to reading the rest.

Ok, got me there a little until I remembered this was just an interlude and not the main story - but it would make a great flashback. Thanks