That was cute.

PS. - Poor Cyborg lol.

The fact that it was a poem an I just saw a rap battle. The whole time I was reading the story I eard music in my head, an I was just waiting for them to start dissing each other!

So so touching! Wonderful

So adorable! I am lost for words...

Aww! This was so cute on so many levels! Nice rhyming, too!

That was beautiful! I am teeming with admiration. :)

Awwwwwww. I LOVE it, soo cute!

As much as I hate Valentines Day (sorry, I'm just one seriously lonely bastard), I do love a good love story, and this was great. Though the words Raven used were harsh it was nice to see her make amends, because coming from personal experience, the love isn't always returned when one falls for a friend. (And thanks, all that rhyming is contagious. Lol)

very sweet :)

That was amazing and gorgeous. I cannot imagine how long it must have taken for you to write that. I loved it.

You write the best TT stories! I am addicted XD

Sweetest story/poem. EVER!

You seem to be saying 'dawning' a lot and I think you mean 'donning' as in to don an item of clothing.

Other than that, great story, still prefer your prose to your poetic style but really like your characterisation in both. Raven and BB are adorable. That is all.

Ben

I don't know if you still update this accout or still write stories but you sould continue to do as this poem almost brought a tear to my eye as did your last.