This was different and interesting.

well written i hope you decided to carry it on

This is great! If you ever finish it, I would love to read it D

Sincerely,

~WarriorKnight~

Oh, this is so exciting! Neal is so funny. Please tell me you will be updating! I want Kel’s romantic interest… and I want Dom to make an appearance. *sad puppy-dog eyes* PLEASE don’t give up on this story. I’m putting it on story alert. So I’ll be ready for updates!

Uh oh… A war without the Wildmage… Jon should be nervous :P And then Numair sticks with her (he is a sweetie)! Poor Jon LOL! And I’m liking Thayet massaging him ;) And I just love Jon in this. He really is having a rough day haha.
Best line ever: “So what are we going to do Thayet? I'm guessing you’re in-charge since Jon is still banging his head on the table." Hahaha omg that was a hilarious visual of Jon.

I love the description of beautiful Kel. I always pictured her to be attractive in my head (although not Goddess beautiful lol) even though I don’t think that’s how Tamora Pierce envisions her. I love how she looks out for Neal :) and how she wanted to be honest with her friends.

And this is random but I love the: ,.-''-.,.-''-.,.-''-.,.-'' pattern you use to separate and use as dividers… do you mind if I use that too sometime? (I’ll give you credit! It’s so pretty.)

I love this, I'm so intrigued. I like how Kel didn’t use any powers as a page, because one of my favorite traits about her character is her determination and her sheer hard work to get what she wants. Very interesting plot-line!

i really like this but i'd like it more if...you know...you finihed it! lol (not trying to be rude there) i believe you mentioned updating frequently, but its been over 2 years! please please please update soon!

~Vampiremuggle

vampiremuggle at gmail dot com

I love it!

Especially when she mentions Neal!

A good story. Continue.

i hope you come back to this

Interesting. What's the secret. Please update!

I liked the old plot better, I think. But could you please explain why you haven't updated in more than a MONTH. I know people are busy, but a MONTH!

Sorry I didn't message you. But I really loved your story, and I hope you continue. Because it's very good and I'd like to see where your story leads. To see Kel as a Goddess is an idea I haven't heard of yet and I think it's very intreging to see it in that light. So please do continue I love your story line and I hope you keep it up along with adding more chapters. - Work hard and don't be discouraged if you don't get reviews sometimes people tend to forget. Just like me...

Your fan,

Wishingstardust

i already knew who margarry was, is colin new? update soon!